About the power levels. I am guessing you made them more even was so that you don't have the z fighters blowing up things all over the place and killing things easily like that. That's because it would not make a good story. You HAD to even it out which is very cool.

You evened them up properly so I was wrong. Not 7/10 But 8/10 is much better of a mark. _

Very good story. I must say. Though some of the characters were WAY off. (like Aerith crying to easily and Vegeta being the most off character seeing as you made him easy to manipulate)

Not only that but the characters power levels are WAY off. Seeing as Cloud even combined with everyone else would not stand a chance against Vegeta from the Sayian saga. So kind fan girlish on your part. Plus you had some plot holes like how was Aerith brought back to life? I mean she WAS dead as Cloud said in the first chapter. But now she isn't? Seriously.

Normally a fan fiction that has the z fighters a LOT weaker then what they normally are and on par or weaker than the other characters in the story (like in this one)and has plot holes and have some of the major characters(like Vegeta) personalities off usually sucks...but you made this pretty damn good.

-1 for plot holes

-1 for Off power levels

-1 for off some of the characters personalities being off.

Total score 7/10 Good job _

This is an awesome story so far.

I liked your story. But I didn't like the fact that you killed Red XI (He is my favorite character.

Oh... I found this and it's all complete... I will read the rest later... it's very interesting!

Wow, you UPDATED. I was sure you'd abandoned this project, but I guess I was wrong. Both new chapters were pretty cool. Please continue the story!

This is an ending?...You sure know how to make cliff hangers.

It's a great story and all, the way you managed to incorporate the characters is impressive and the story line is equally remarkable, but the story just seems to have stopped utterly dead without any real ending.

Hope you make an update to this and round off any loose ends.

Goku served as a very minor character in this story on purpose. It is my personal opinion that one of the grave flaws of DBZ was it's single focus on Goku. The world revolved around Goku and much continuity within the series was destroyed to maintain this fan-service. If it's more Goku you want, then by all means, there's the entire series of DBZ for you. I wanted here to bring out the characters which the original series never gave the attention I think they deserved.

I'm not sure which loose ends you mean, since I'm fairly certain that I actually do explain everything. Perhaps not in as many words as you might like, but the answers are there for those who seek them. I wrote this fic meticulously, knowing everything that would happen well before it happened and taking much care to make sure that the answers were indeed there.

This goes for the ending as well. It may have seemed abrupt, but it ended in the only way it could. Perhaps there are pieces to the puzzle you are yet missing, and this is why the ending seems unresolved.

It was never the point of this story to be spelled out, and thus such an ending would be a disservice to the rest. If you really want closure, reread the fic. Take a closer look, and maybe even take a look inside yourself. The answers are waiting.

However, if you think you'll die unless I spell it out for you, email me. I'll see if I can't lead you in the right direction.

Awesomeness of a story... Although there were a few inconsistencies with even the FF7 story but mostly with DBZ. You obviously made FF7 the dominant element in the story, as you only use a couple characters from Dragonball Z in there and pretty much inject them in. I don't judge you though, because if it was me, on the flip side I would have put just as much of a DBZ spin on it.

I would have also liked to see you develop Goku's personality a bit more in it... He serves as only a very minor character in your story. You also leave alot of occurences unexplained.

All these "loose ends" aside, your story kept me addicted from chapter one! I couldn't pry my eyes from it and read the entire thing in one sitting. The ending is much too much of an abrupt cliffhanger to count, I think. It doesn't really feel like an ending at all.

Write more chapters! If you don't, I will! O_o. With your permission, of course. I was at least expecting Goku to deflect the Meteor with a spirit bomb or something.

Now don't get me wrong. This is in no way intended to be a bad review. These are just the few minor details that stood out to me because the rest of the story was sheer perfection that needs no explanation here. Think about it: The only bad things I could say were just nitpicky details and the only reason they seemed so highlighted is because of the pool of awesomeness they are in.

Overall: 9.7 out of 10!

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Well, folks, the story is finally finished. I know you have a lot of questions. What happened between Jenova and Jenosavel? What is up with the kitten? What's going to happen now?

The answers are all in the story, though it might take some thought. _~ I've always loved making people think, and I'm not about to spell it all out. I hope you've enjoyed my story, and I hope you can find the answers you seek.

Yay! The story isn't over!

Great explanations, makes me wonder what will happen between Jenosavel and Jenova, and there is something strange about that kitten... I hope you update soon.

hey that was really good. please finish it.

Remember that friend you made over a year ago? The one that wrote Jumanji/Starcraft crossover?

The one that wrote the Final Fantasy VII/Sailormoon Crossover and reviewed your work.

He was named RudolphZoey before he finally went off. It's me!

I forgot the email address I used to that account and I created this one to submit my stories. I shall post the Final Fantasy VII story again because I want that story to continue. I'll put in the fact that I had forgotten my username and everything.

As usual, your story is off the charts in my book, I even told one of my friends (Final Fantasy Nut) about this one.

Keep your eyes peeled for more of my stories. I've given up on Scamp's Great Adventure and almost all the rest of my stories save for FFVII Eternal Struggle. Different Perspective (under name Hmoon-Karen) is one I can still access.

Well if you want to email me, is where to reach me at...CYA!

Hey! This is one off the best Fic, That crossover DBZ & Ff7 that I had read every before. I love that anime show and thats the best Final Fantasy game ever. Good job, AMIGO! Keep up the good work!