This is a fun take-off on the HP story, if not a bit incestuous. More description would add dimension, but that may not be the direction you intended to go. The repartee among the students really flowed. It's a fast enjoyable read.

Why isn't it rated R? That would make more sense, wouldn't it, my dear?

Don't forget about mad fairy!

-this be The Karlminion, and he be signin' off-

Crikey! That was a wonderful story! lol. I don't know about Ron and Hermione getting married and having a kid, but hey, to each its' own. he he.

i have soem questionns...first you keep saying he then she about the same person! soo, it it a he or a she?

and *ahem* Draco wasn't born when tonks was in hogwarts

plz update katie plz?

cmon write more katie more!

Ello my lover. I am good looking, and you are ugly akimboes! MUAHAHA!

so the title of yur story is getting some wierd looks from the people sitting next to me. write more soon or you'll recieve dire consequences

Why on earth did I not read this before? I think it's time for a LuAnnie smacking. This was brilliant as always. Nice twist at the end...why is malfoy american now? Well I'd write more but my reading this is putting my comuter priveleges at risk. (aka I'm in studyhall)

Cute! I like your pairings! Your story is a new twist on HP, and I really like it. Cool fic!

wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!
i loved it! it was very enjoyable. i cant wait for more! it is a relief from reality!
from your loving best friend who is so nice and preety and beautiful... Rachelie-poo

Oh, you are a corndog. I enjoyed the naked witches part. _ I wrote a new story for you, as you are my muse.

good story! update soon!

good story! update soon!

I love the beginning you have here. When are you going to write more? I think it's kind of sad how the boys are... well, like that. But it's really funny, and I want to see what happens.