I was a bit of disappointed in Sara. How could she trust Grissom the way she did? Let's hope Grissom meant more than just kisses and sweet words. Let's hope he wouldn't give Sara any reason to question her own sanity.

It was a veŕy efficient first chapter providing the reads with all that needed to know plus all thee unspoken parts for the readers to put in place, like all the whys and only-ifs.

I was glad to see Sara put her own happiness ahead of others-let it be people or matters. The beauty of it would be to find out if Grissom knew how to handle an assertive Sara..

Beautiful last line! :D I completely loved the whole thing.

loved it.

wow, just found this story as I was combing through the archives...what a perfectly romantic work, a hard task to achieve when the setting revolves around a crime lab ;)...just beautiful...

that was ADORABLE!

Beautiful! I just love it when Grissom gets emotional. Those writers who can throw him into angsty situations and keep him in character-such as yourself-just rock. Thanks for sharing!

ok, whatever your regular job or school or whatever, you should quit and write 100% of the time! this is definitely one of my favorite stories of yours!

what a wake-up-call! great!

Short, sweet, emotional... and very, very well-written. Love it! :D

Wonderful, wonderful fic. You've captured the essense of their emotions so well, without having to come out and name them. I loved it. I hope you keep writing.

I'm not trying to leave you a "THAT WAS REALI GUD!" Review, but I'm knackered, so this will be short.
You gave an excellent beginning an equally satisfying ending, I almost jumped when he kissed her the first time, I could see it playing out in my mind. I like the awkwardness and tentativeness and I really love what you've done. Can't wait to read more.

What an ending! Touching, simply touching. It was fate you know! :-) Thanks for bringing Griss to his senses and finally redeeming himself. I was tearing up there at the end. Thanks so much for sharing this excellent story and please write more, more, more!

A set of circumstances brings them back together. I love how you portray the emotion she felt when she saw Grissom and Catherine. I hope that there a sequel soon.

A perfect, perfect fic. Do you hear me? This is PERFECT. Not only are the characterizations top-notch, but you have a way with words that makes them flow so evenly and amazingly. You're a fantastic writer.