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Guest chapter 16 . 8/3/2017 It seems wrong that someone is blamed for others' deaths when he did nothing except get a disease that spread out to them when he even had no reason to suspect he even had that. It's not like he willingly made it happen or could have done anything to stop it. No one would arrest him for that. |
Guest chapter 16 . 1/16/2014 Make more so fucking good |
WinchesterNimrod chapter 3 . 12/20/2013 SUCH A GREAT PLOT! i'm not really into this kind of stuff (sorry) but this is extremely good. and WONDERFUL(: Hope you have completed it, if not keep on writing for the love of god! |
007 chapter 3 . 5/23/2013 Loosing his memory? Why bother making Harry travel from an AU then, just wright a story about a Harry who grew up in a world with no Voldemort. |
Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 16 . 12/28/2011 ~ Harry still did not receive anything from his friends What's going on? Have they abandoned him now because he has already defeated Voldemort? What if Voldemort never existed? Then Slytherins wouldn't be considered as evil, I hope. It seems the stone will not allow Harry to return until he has seen more of this world, if ever. When did Dumbledore enter? Eavesdropper. And how did he know he is wanted here? ~ That he is you, in your body, in your world… Darn! I can only hope that the "sadistic" Harry doesn't have any battle experience and can be overpowered by Aurors if he tries to attack somebody. ~ Who's the headmaster? Now that would be telling! Tom Marvolo Riddle? ~ "Defiantly Muggles," Chapter 6: Definitely Ha-ha. It turns out, sadistic Harry has to fight against Voldemort now, since he wasn't killed before the travel. I'm curious. I suppose that with two insane homicidal maniacs there can be no alliance, they will fight, I hope. And, is sadistic Harry still contagious, will he bring Feveritus to Voldemort's world? In any case, when our Harry returns to his world, he should remember everything about Feveritus and fighting against it, like Potion recipes; just in case. And, Harry wasn't the one to kill his friends; the virus killed them. ~ There's no way that really happened, dead people don't just come back to life, I wish they bloody did,' So 'sadistic' Harry still feels emotions. And his Animagus form is a beautiful scarlet phoenix... Why? How could phoenix be so twisted? ~ "I've only ever seen one of these…and it was in the possession of the dark lord." So the Dark Lord, instead of travelling to another reality, sent Harry away. He doesn't expect Harry to return with knowledge to defeat him, or other Harry to have the will and ability to fight against him. He expects other Harry to be an ordinary student, not a boy-who-lived, and have no power to defeat him. ~ The wards on you allow you to do magic outside of school. So are the wards with sadistic Harry, with orphan-Harry, or both? ~ Even though they're punishing the wrong person! Idiots! Why didn't anybody mention that Harry has taken Veritaserum? It's Sirius all over again! Strange... And both worlds are insane. Though I respect Severus Snape in both of them. He is the only positive anchor. |
Shubhs chapter 16 . 6/5/2011 This story is seriously cool. :) |
Serena Elsa Snape chapter 16 . 6/30/2010 This is one of the best stories that I've read story is keeping me on the tips of my toes. I can never guess what is going to happen next. I love how there are two Harry's and one is evil. The good Harry deserves to know his are one of the best author that I have read yet. I hope that you update soon. I really want to know what happens next. |
owugirl10 chapter 16 . 5/29/2010 COME BACK! This is one of the most inventive stories I've read in this genre! Please Please Please finish it! |
owugirl10 chapter 10 . 5/29/2010 I totally picked up on the bird thing! That was my first thought was "This Harry must be an animagus!" Great job so far! |
RockxAngel chapter 2 . 9/5/2009 Great Chapter |
omh666 chapter 12 . 8/3/2009 Can Harry fire travel like the actual animal can, or magical animal anyway? |
omh666 chapter 9 . 8/3/2009 There are two things I'd like to point out here. First I'd like to say that in chapter two you said that Harry has a firbolt in both worlds. Next I'd like to say that you could always have Snape or Dombledor invade Harry's mind to find the truth. |
blklover chapter 16 . 6/23/2009 great story please keep up the good work update soon |
wi11ow chapter 16 . 2/11/2009 Um... consideing the date this was last updated it's been more thatn a week. so are you going to continue cause it is really good story. |
anonymous chapter 10 . 7/14/2007 that harry is annoyingly arrogant, i don't mind him being cold or dark in this, but i hate it when harry is arrogantr in a story, its so annoying, its a great story though but PLEASE just tone down that arrogance! |