this story does not progress like what you wrote in the summary. if you put the characters aside, this would be a great story. but something about this story bothers me. sev is way too OoC, and I think the story is stretched too long and goes way all over the place. ending it when sev and harry's relation is mended would be enough. but continuing it to this far, it's like two stories merged together. and then it lost the sevitus feel. and you might want to mention what happened in Harry's previous school year before sev found him. there's just so many holes.

Ok, this story is just to stupid for me to continue. When you have a doctor defending a man's abuse if his son, that just goes to far.

Your little Mary-Sue had some nerve herself for chastising Harry for being angry at a man who has abused Harry for years! Why shouldn't Harry hate the man for abusing him? How is his verbal abuse of Harry any different than the Dursley's? Because of some bogus excuse that it 'protected him'?! How about having the headmaster do his job and threaten to fire Snape it's he didn't stop abusing students? If he had wanted to, he could have found a way around it.

One think I hate about is the negative guest reviews.

I loved this tale, especially the iom tales.
I’m a bit late to the party but so glad I got to enjoy it.
Thankyou ms Padfoot

Wow, this is badly written. Don’t they teach millennials how to use punctuation?

This book, Because You're Mine, is an absolute must read for all Severus Snape fans! When I read The Half Blood Prince I knew that there had to be more to Severus than Death Eater! Because You're Mine proved this. I have enjoyed this so much! I wish you would write another book! I like a good long read! You did an amazing job with this book, and you should be very proud of your accomplishment! ! Thanks for a GREAT read!

Why is Severus the younger brother? If his mother met Grigori first he should be the oldest.

ch. 3 - Wow - very powerful. I am drawn to an author that can bring God into a storyline and in a way that is strong and not snarky. Thank you.

when getting into the later chapters I thought to myself I dont want to leave these characters I've grown to love them and don't want it to end. I am I bit sad that Severus didn't get is true happy ending and stunned himself...fake new...whyyyyy... but I do love how everything came full circle. beautiful writing and thank you for sharing your world and view

What about the aunt's culpability?

Good story - what comes next?

Somehow, being an auror doesn't seem to be the best option for Siri/Harry.

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I have a question about Sirus Black. We do learn that Authur got him the trial. My question is what happened in 5th year as it was the yr he died in the books. I take I thing didn't happen like that in this story.

I always wondered about Harry not having a wand when he needs it for classes.