Reviews for A Few Things Straighter
DaraSerian chapter 9 . 12/17/2012
Awesome! lots of great parts and as a whole felt like I was watching an episode on tv. loved it.
DaraSerian chapter 2 . 12/17/2012
"oops" I literally laughed out loud, that was hilarious. And I loved the sos, very clever.
DaraSerian chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
Ahhhh...sigh, I haven't watched SG1 in a while because it isn't on my instant netflix que anymore. This first chapter has me greedy for more. It's like watching a tv episode. Funny, and perfect.
Alia el Bolock chapter 9 . 9/10/2011
Well I love a good twist with action and whump with a deeper hidden meaning at the end... I was really enjoyig it bt the last sentence with the comeback to the title was just the amazing topping of the cake D
ReggieRogue chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
but in a good way D
ReggieRogue chapter 9 . 7/29/2006
ok...that was wierd
ChRsTiNe17 chapter 9 . 12/4/2004
really liked your story, can't wait to read your other writings
Natters chapter 9 . 8/11/2004
more please
Sci Fi Fan Gillian chapter 9 . 8/11/2004
That was good.
Neo Sailor Saggitarius chapter 8 . 7/31/2004
It's coming along nicely. I can't wait to see what happens next. And remember you have to keep writing, just because I say so. I am your friend after all.
SG1-Fanfic chapter 8 . 7/30/2004
Good story. Can't wait to find out what happens.. and what is going on! :)
Natters chapter 8 . 7/30/2004
good
Sci Fi Fan Gillian chapter 8 . 7/30/2004
good chapter
dietcokechic chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
Great start Gunney! A bit curious as to why it was Sam and Jack going on a mission, but heck- the point of the whole thing is to put them together right?
I'm not certain why you have required folks to log in, but IMHO you should turn it off. Folks are mighty nice on ff and you'll get a lot more feedback if you allow for un-registered reviewers. Just my 2 cents! Looking forward to reading more.
Sci Fi Fan Gillian chapter 7 . 4/20/2004
Good chapter.
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