aaiya is brian kurune? please say he is! u havent even described them yet! u havent described kurama's hotness or anything! make sthe story more interesting when ur droolin over the characters ne? lol

You need to get into something else...you are obsessed with YYH. Try some other animes. There's a lot out there that you'd like...OTHER than Kurama.
P.S. I think you'd like Devan...you'd find him quite cute. _~

I loved it! parts were so funny that I literally fell off my chair laughing!

that was god was this supposed to be a one-shot? if not...! Pwease *puts on puppy face*

vary good I bet it will get beter if you right more

this is an interesting beginning. please update soon.

sou sou...watashiwa kokoni yomimasuga, soshite...iidesune.
-_-; watashiwa bakano sokoni hanashimasu.
HONTODESUKA?
teehee gomen. tomodachini watashino hanashimashita.
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