Glad this little gem was recommended to me! Great characterization, and I love seeing the "folklore" element and how it ties to Thomas making BEEK one day! Love it!

i cant believe i havent reviewed this piece yet. this is the seventh time im reading it. this fic has the creative authenticism fic writers strive for. i dont suppose theres a chance that youll come back to the Zoids section?

That was gorgeous! :D

~Ark

It does'nt matter how many times I read this story, it seems new every time. SC

That was so cute I loved it it made me cry ...I'm working on a fanfic about Karl and Thomas but its about how Karl is kileld in battle and Thomas has to help take care of Karl's son Matthias

Wow, it's been so long since this was made and I'm just now getting to it. Well, it was worth the wait. It's so amusing, and it shows how wonderful the two brothers are. :)

Hee, I love how the boy from the fairytale was basically Thomas. Green eyes...the red marking...yeah. XD

I wish that you'd write other stories like this. :(

ek! that was so cute. hahaha.

Beutifully writen and interesting story about the zoids. Keep up the good work and karl was portrayed magnificently "go his magnificently minty eyes(and Thomas' too)".

man, your fic was way cute.

even though half the time I didn't know what Thomas was saying xD

This is so cute! i love the way that the characters interact. Also, i noticed that the marking described in the story matches with the marking on thomas' face. just thought to point that out. i hope there's more chapters to come.

This is a good story please continue but not chapters this big

Aw! This is incredible! It's really really realistic, and it fits in perfectly with the actual show. You have Karl's mild condescension (sorry, can't spell that word...contempt, distaste, whatever) to Thomas' mechanics, Thomas's complete focus on mechanics and Zoids, as well as his intelligence - he's not stupid after all, like he's often shown as being. And that lisp is adorable! Seriously kawaii! And I especially love the family relationships, especially the one between Karl and Thomas, it's just so sweet. Uggh. Sweet. That is not I word I use often...Not really into too much sap, but I have to make an exception for this, this is one of my favourite Zoid fics so far. And lots of deeper meaning...
Brilliant one-shot, please write more!
Bye bye, Grey

So good to see something from you again, vvoltaire! Lovely work as always, with great characterisation and dialogue, and the story-within-a-story was a nice touch. Great work.

AWW! So cute! Li'l Thomas! Squee!

Aw that's so sweet..._ [squee!] Gotta love these kind of brotherfics *huggles her thomas/karl plushies*
it was very, very sweet. I loved this_ *hands vvoltaire a cookie*
[..i know, the review sucks. But I just woke up and this is what people get-_-]
Anyways, very, very, sweet and lovely one-shot [is it?]. Love the fairytale. Aw, lisping Thomas.. adorable! *goes and huggles Thomas plushie some more*
-Firemoon