awesome story

WAIT what did he say! NOOOOO

I Take offense in chapter 2 where u instead of calling max, max u refeered to her as black girl. We have a color, yes. But we also have a name that we would like people to use.

Already I love how in-character Max is. This story should be interesting as I dive into it.

That eas great! And i was kindof looking forward to a Max/JAck pairing but Max/Terry is good_ So keep up with the good work

oh i loved this batman series when it first came out...and i love this fanfic!

i always had a secret wish for max and terry to hook up...and youve got me hooked...please update soon!

loved the story and the writing, but i'm a Dand-lover

Wow Love your story. It was great. THis is the one of the few BB stories that I have wanted to finsh in a while. Keep up the good work.

You're very good at this. Just watch your editing type junk. Please write more! I know that's not the end!

I think you have done a wonderful job with this story.

Aw what a nice story. I enjoyed reading it, only bad part was the cliff hanger at the end of the last chapter, can't wait for the next one.

Oh...I absolutely LOVE IT! I love the whole Max and Terry pairing...I love Max, and I think she is the perfect match for Terry. I don't have anything against Dana, it's just...well, Max can understand him more and they can be so open together...moreso than Terry and Dana. But, that's not the end is it? If it isn't, you HAVE to update soon!

~Mars~

i really enjoyed this story, it was or is the best batman beyond story that ive read so far. it think that taking a scene from the show and creating a stortyline from it is a hard thing to do, but you did it marvelously.i approve!

keep writing more stories!

that was so nice i like ur stori

Ms.J I just finished reading this story and might I say you did not disappoint. Girl, this fic was off the chain. Cheerleader ninjas, a crazy love doctor selling perfume that makes men go bankrupt, a love struck joker, a salsa stepping former gang member, and a TM hook-up all in one. Whoo, I was rolling with this one. Funniest sentence of the whole fic: "After the words ‘my place’ someone got into someone’s else face, words were exchanged". It straight up sounded like one of my friends recapping a fight they saw. *I'm still laughing* Although I cringed when Jack let the words " ...my place" slip from his mouth, I was completely suprised and amused that Terry got on him. For a second there I was worried that Ter would get back with Dana and Max would still be alone (yeah, I'm a TM fan). So, I was all kinds of happy that Ter didn't sink back into his relationship with Dana and decided to confront Max on his changing feelings for her. I mostly enjoyed the way you wrote this story, like living certain details out at times added to th the stituation taking place. [Note: the fight between Ter and Jake. And later Terry talking to Max at the end.] This fic was so good I wasn't even upset that there wasn't more to the ending. Enough of my rambling, great job:)

P.S. I checked out your profile to see what other stories you had written and was completely tripped out that you go to Eckerd College. I go to SPC, but I live right down the street from Eckerd.