I am now positive that you are totally evil as you just skipped out on having Ranma telling the story of his trip and him receiving the manual to his friends or how these four are friends to begin with. And while I can respect what it is that you had Ranma do I can't say the same for you letting him get away from having his curse not exposed some how. He is a water magnet with this curse and he went the whole day without being cursed! That is not how it is suppose to work. And you still seem to have abandon this story as no real update or changes seem to have been made from what I can tell. Granted it is way to late to know if any changes were ever made or not but I honestly don't think that there has been any made.

Your just barely getting into things and you choose to end it there that is kinda evil of you. I personally think that maybe you should started this story, by starting with how Ranma and Nabiki first came upon there manuals and them taking the oath and then how the four first met. I think that would have been a better opener to this story.

You know this would have been a little more interesting if you had letters going back and forth instead of just one way. You also failed to tie this series in with those books as I enjoyed them myself, when they came out.

Nice... though I would hazard that the lone one and the powers are working well while not together at least with the same goals in this. To drive/Test the two wizards to their insanity/potential. This is too much like the books young wizards and ranma to be anything else, also the lone one did control chaos as well.

Nice work. Hope you continue this. Thanks for sharing.

I certainly enjoyed this crossover. You remain faithful to both of the sources, and I like the humorous tone that shows up in everyone appreciates that the original Ranma 1/2 was a parody...

I do have a problem with those who portray Akane as a permanently-PMS manhater with no redeeming qualities. That is not what Takahashi intended.

Keep up the good work.

Mike

like it

I'm liking the story! I hope to see it continue, although considering how long it's been... yet another abandoned GOOD story. *Sniffle*

This story idea is great. I like this one as well as the prequel. I hope you update soon.

Well, I certainly enjoyed reading this. By a curious coincidence, I am currently reading Wizard's Holliday and writing my own Ranma fic - so that put me in an ideal frame of mind to read your story.

A wise sage once said "there are no coincidences".

Hmm

Keep it up,

Mike

good, byes

I hope you're going to keep updating, this is hilarious!

This is very nice. I look forward to the next chapter. Thank you.

Again. Nicely done. First x-over of this type I've seen and "So You Want to Be a Wizard" is a great series. I don't care if you usually have to find them in the juvie section they are well written and have a great story line.

Keep up the good work and (try) to post more often.

(As the pot calls the kettle black).

Oh, I'm eager to see Nodoka's arrival. She shouldn't be to surprised with Ranma's curse, but she should give Genma a beating for being so stupid and lecture Ranma on the importance of checking the manual before entering any old training ground.