So sad.

I like this. I think it shows well how complicated relationships can do. Well done.

I really like this one, its got a nice style to it. Well done!

v. well-written, Grace has lots of angst inside her-I'm a huge Luke/Grace shipper, so I don't like the ending but hey, that's my prob. This story really gets into Grace's head and that last line is awesome (mean both in the slang term as well as the dictionary def)

*loves* So awesome. You have a unique style in a fandom full of boring 3rd person narrative (me included *g*) You really got Grace. I loved it so much I'm going over to rec it at joa_fic_recs so that everyone can share in my love for you!

i liked the perspective you used on this. i especially loved the last line. nice work :)

WOW. Great!

I think I left a comment in arcadian_tales, but I must leave another. I love this. I don't particularly fly the Joan/Grace flag (though I think every episode brings me one step closer), but this is completely believable in terms of character. You've got Grace's voice, and I think second person ("no such thing"? That's why I distrust so much of fanfiction...) was definitely the best choice. The deliberate distancing is so her. I hope you choose to write more in fandoms I'm actually part of. :)

Fantastic. Absolutely fantastic.
I've been a big fan of yours since you wrote "The King of Practical Wisdom". I kept hoping you'd hop back into 'Gilmore Girls' fanfic, but here you are in JoA. And that's alright. It's all good.
Wonderful characterization. Your diction is marvelous.
I hope to see more from you.

Dude, I loved it. I read it once and when I realized it was Grace I went back. I didn't think it was confusing at all. I always thought there should be more Grace/Joan fics. Please continue.
P.S. There is no such thing as 2nd person POV. There is 1st, 3rd and 3rd omniscient

I like it. The way you've got the 2nd person thing happening is a really nice tactic... keep it up!

Keep gooing! It's Great so far!

OK, I think I must've left my brain in my locker, cuz I don't get why Grace was angry. But then, I don't get a lot of things...like why it took Joan and adam so long to kiss..._

I like it. I really like it. Is that all? -Big puppy dog eyes- Please, continue. For me? -Batts eyelashes-
Sometimes I had to remember it was Grace, but whatever. I'm slow that way. xD Keep writing,
-xTali

the idea behind the fic is good but it was kinda confusing.