Okay,dude,you need to give me more. Yhis is awesome and I'm adding it to my favorites, very well written.

Coru,

This is a brilliant fiction. I've always wondered what would have happened if Joan didn't ask Ramsey out and you've written it. I loved this story.

Keep on writing,

Paige Halliwell

Pleez pleez PLEEZ UPDATE! I know it's been awhile, but it's an awesome story! You did really well at capturing what might've happened. A story this good can't just be left unfinished! Pweez?

updates woman! ;)

It's great! I'd love to see Adam's POV through all of this. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

I really really really hope there is going to be more. I would love to see more consequences.

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Okay, here are my fanfiction challenges. I would really like it if
someone would write about them. I would, but I suck at writting. If
you decide you want to write about one of them or so e-mail me and
give me the final story in the e-mail. Thanks.
1. What were Luke's feelings at the dance after Adam came to tell
his mom that Joan got into the car with Ramsey? What were Luke and
Kevin going through while they waited for their dad to come home and
tell them if Joan was alright or not?
2. What were Adam's feelings as he saw Joan run out with Ramsey to
the time he got home after he took Will to Joan? What was he feeling
while Ramsey had Joan basically as his hostage waving the gun
around? What happened when Joan falls to the ground as Will takes
Ramsey away? Does Adam go to her or not?
3. Write about Joan's life as she grows up. What is the backstory to
her family? How did her and her brothers get their close
relationship?
4. What happens when a madman comes and takes Luke, Joan, Grace,
Adam, and some others hostage? What happens when Joan gets shot in
the leg by him when she tries to get him to let her friends go? How
will Luke, Grace, Adam, and Joan deal with thier friendship and get
out of ther and get to safety.
5. Anorexia is something that many people have to deal with in the
U.S. and anywhere else. Write about what happens when Joan becomes
anorexic and how her family and friends help her through these dark
times. This can be used as a Girardi family love story, a Joan/Adam
story, and a Luke/Grace story.
Thanks so much and I hope someone can use these to write a story. :)

That is so sad, I wonder what will happen next.

I like this. Please continue. I'm looking forward to how her family reacts.

Wow. I really liked that. Can't wait for chapter two

Sugah-
If you don't continue this I will be very upset. This is an amazing peice of writing. I love how you add in lines from the show.

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! SOON!:D:D

Great story. It is plausable that is what would have happened if Joan had not listened. I really enjoyed this story. Is there going to be anymore? An aftermath or anything? I would really enjoy more, and will read whatever more you write! :)

Very well written. This is the only Uncertanty Principle AU that I've acctually liked. Kudos to you.

Hey! I like this... I hope there's gonna be another chap!