This was a good story. I'm actually writing a HeathxPriscilla story myself right now and I think that you've given me some inspiration to break my writer's block. Thanks for writing this!

Nice fic. Don't read much with Heath and Priscilla, but this one's really good.

1412: Very interesting. Although I've never gotten a HealthxPriscilla paring before...they could still work out.

Evan: The reason as to why you never got that pairing before is that you're too lazy to do the supports and just finish the game for the sake of finishing the game.

1412: Shut up...I'm trying to do supports now aren't I?

George: Actually, you just want to see how funny they could be.

1412: Argh! You two voices aren't helping anyone!

EG: We know.

1412: (fumming) at least you portrayed each charater according to their personalities! That's more than I can say for myself...still trying though...if you ever wonder why this review seems so weird, visit my Author's page or profile or whatever people call it now a days (sounds like an old person)

That was a good story you wrote there! You know, I'm also a big fan of the pairing Heath/Priscilla, and you know what? Reading your story has given me inspiration to write my own fanfic about it. I don't know if will publish it on this site, though, or even if I'm gone to write in english, but anyway, thanks. Reading your story was very fun and very interesting as well. Hope you'll write some others!

I love this story! I would love if you wrote one were Heath and Priscilla got married and had a kid or adopted one. Please write more Heath and Priscilla!

I love this story! Write more about Priscilla and Heath. I loved how you gave Heath a " life" berfore he joined Eliwood's army. I love your other stories about Jaffar and Nino and Ninian and Eliwood. Can you write more about Heath's background, like what happened to his parents? Thanks for being one of the only Priscilla Heath writers. I am sick of all the Heath and Legault stories. Keep being a super writer. : Link Holtz

That was a very good read, and there's a few pointer's I'd like to...err...point...out.

The character description is really good, and I can't get enough on how you present them, but describing the location and things they are seeing is rather rare and incomplete. Although I can picture it myself, I always think to myself "Objects in the rear view mirror may appear closer than they are" kind of thing when I see that. Although I have no idea why that quote enters my mind at such situation (Is frankly, quite sad). The reader's don't see the world the way you see it. Although it is from a game and we could guess what things look like (I don't know if this was intentional or not), it certainly helps having that kind of description, even if its basic, at least its there.

It seems rather raw, although partially because of reading "The Angel and The Slayer" which raised my expectations to all your stories. It is especially so because it seems to lack that feeling that just makes people smile when you write.

Last: There's a mistake (OMG I found a mistake!):

"Very well then," Eliwood said. "You may take your leave. Hector will show you around after we are don’t talking."

Read it over a couple times.

"We are DON'T talking?" I don't recall that being gramarrically possible...

Awesome ideas!

HEY I really... REALLY loved this fic . ! Heath is my favourite character ever xD so sad that he don't have so much fics...

:) I liked this. Heath is an awesome character.

As always, great story! They are so interesting! .

that was a really good story i liked it a lot.

Now I know why you're so pro Heath/Priscilla... actually I am too, I drew them together and it looks better than most other pairings...so anyway, this story was awesome! and real cute! I just wanted to let you know that...yeah

well im counted as the late reviewers but hey great fic man , u have to write another Heath/Priscilla fic again, their pairing is one of the best in the game

...It's over? ...What? Why? I couldn't sleep, pay attention during class, or stop thinking about this story until I finished it! HeathPriscilla is the kind of pairing that's almost impossible to find. I liked HeathPriscilla before, but you made me want to actually get them to support each other and stuff like that. It's now my favorite FE7 pairing.

why does it hafta END?*cries* thanku for writing such a great story i couldnt sleep, i couldnt eat...not until i finished this story n i finally did n now im sad! heehee so cool! if my bro heard this he would go: -.- but so wut! i loved this story!