Beautiful story!

I can't believe he's blind. This is ssssooo sad. I love it. Its so emotional. Why did sakura get on the plane to Japan instead of America though? I'm seriously crying. Great job

The end is so sad because Syaoran became blind

Why did syaoran have to be blind? X'(
Anyway,it's a great story

I really love your story! Especially this chapter, so touching!

Fascinatingly charming and sweet, really sweet :)

Wow :) I think this is gonna be one of my favs :) Great job!

I liked it really, though I don't think an eight year old knows how to use the word "damn."

i love your story! i thought he was going to die it's a good thing that you didn't let him

keep up the good work! )

UGH THAT WAS SO FUCKING SAD T.T WHY DOES HE HAVE TO BE BLIND? ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I'm cryinggggg _! Thanks for writing a lovely story~~!

*love the story but the sOnq is

Back to your heart not spanish eyes..

thought i'd let u know...;]

if no one has mentiioned it yet..:]*

4 ur first story this is fantastic , buh y oh y did ya havta make Syao blind? couldn't he b the 20% that doesnt get blind? -.-... well ur a great writer... i hope i will b able 2 read ur future stories... ty 4 writin )

soo sad how come syaoran has to be blind can't he be perfectly fine. But great story i hate josh he is such a jerk

Well, what can I say? Honestly, I liked the original blurb of the story - boy and girl who were lovers when they were kids, and the girl "died" in a plane accident, got amnesia, returned to the boy, and then they fell in love again. It would have been cheesy, but cute. Instead, the story goes boy tries to get girl to love again, then vice versa, and it goes on, and on to a point where it kind of got too extreme.

The epilogue...was good, but I think it would have been better if it was a separate chapter. Not an epilogue. For me, epilogues are like, "What happens to the character after the story is finished?" Not it actually being part of the plot, but I think that many FF writers are like that.

It's a bit far-fetched to place Sakura as 23rd in line to the throne and still give her a title with "princess". But, I don't really care.

The last point that I'll criticize you is the naming. It's kind of messed up when you have Anglicized given names and then Japanese family names. So it would have been nice to have probably looked it up in a Japanese baby name dictionary [or whatever] and found Japanese names. It'd kind of go with the flow more.

I liked the plot. And I really liked the chapter titles too, especially the last.

This is a sweet chapter :]

very well written. I don't think i found any grammer mistakes. :D

Great. i'm looking forward to this story :D