You know just realised something the fea only said they don't want to eat fish said nothing about humans and humans and dolphins are both mammals so why would the humans with stud rods have anything to do with them not eating fish why will that count unless they swear off all meats which ain't possible even if they ate kelp or algea there still living creatures in it same with corrals might be a plant but it's a living creature with a stomach same with most sea life and most sharks are cannibals even before they are born. And for that matter blue tang aka fighting fish also eat other fish if they don't get enough to eat they are also predanders like sharks blue tang are also known as surgeonfish Wonders if they see crabs and turtles as fish or even zooplanktons or whales

What I find interesting is how they never knew that tini tiny fish on movie could of eaten them. Or how dory species been known to eat fish not to mention her bright colours shows she is extremely poisonous if something manage to eat her

Wonders if they see crabs as fish do to Dory fed one to seagulls now that was funny and my favorite part of the movie

...Wow. Just...Wow. This is, hands down, one of the BEST Finding Nemo fanfics on this site! What really makes me smile about this is that it REALLY resembles the tone of a Pixar movie! In fact, you could have told me that this was the script for a Pixar mini-movie, like they did with Toy Story, and I would have believed you!

Oh my God this is one of the best Nemo fanfictions on this site! I'm dying! I loved how Gurgle had seen Jaws that was just bloody hilarious I was smiling all the way through because Jaws is my favourite film lol! I love how every single one of the characters is IN character big shock! Marlin although still anxious for Nemo'sorry safety is willing to help out larger fish he wouldn't have dreamed of associating with before and he set rusting his son more which is nice to see.
It was really nice to see Bruce reconcile with his father, although I must admit although I do love sharks, Rodney was scary!
I loved the lines as well, I could just imagine every character saying them.
-Ooh! He sees me do you think he seyes me?
-Don't worry sweetheart. He definitely sees you XD

Dory was hilarious in this! "Keep pushing I can see the head! Sorry, I got mixed up!" Oh my God! XD I laughed out loud at the P Sherman joke and when Dory misprounced Anchor's name!
"That's not the worst way she's misprounced my name." OOHHHH I see what you did there!
All in all, awesome story Dude! Can't stress that enough!

I really liked this. D If I didn't know who Bruce's father was, I would almost consider this cannon. According to Pixar, Bruce's father was Jaws, which is part of why he's so sensitive about his father, since he was so violent, but that doesn't mean this story wasn't good!

Dory: "Could I be the Entree. Could I?"

XD

*Applauds*

Great story! Nice chapter names, too. I loved it.

I know that this is an older story, but I can't help but read it over and over again! I absoludtely LOVE Bruce, and I think there should be more stories written about him. I think you capture the characters perfectly, and I'm glad to see Bruce reunited with his dad :D

When Anchor commented on Dory mispronouncing his name, that absolutely killed me. XD I'm still LOLing! I really like where your story is going so far...off to read the rest!

Wow. A and thumbs up! That story had it all-well-written, in-character dialogue and a great, strong storyline that was alternately very funny, quite scary, and very touching, even sad. You had good insight. The jokes (such as, "I see the head!" and the Jaws thing and "it's all about the timing!" were just absolutely hysterical!) And one of my favorite characters, Gurgle, had an awesome role in the story-thanks for that, it rocked! And had me terribly upset for a minute there. ;

GOOD JOB!

This is my fav Finding Nemo fiction.

Awsome fic, I love it. ) You did a good job of portraying Gill's character too, even if he wasn't in the story much. Please write more, it's a great fic.

LOVE the angst. *goes to the next chapter* Please, PLEASE don't stop at three, this story's too good!

Great, awsome so far! Can't wait to read the next chapter!