Reviews for Constant
Romulus chapter 1 . 10/21/2004
Oh my God. I don't think...oh my God. Amazing...wow. I...wow...I have no idea what to write. I'll try to say something that makes sense.

Second person works beautifully in this story. I haven't read too many second person POV stories, but this is deffinitley the best. The emotions, even though it was told in second person, were very real and raw and in your face, without being shoved down your throat. It was beautifully well written, and I love the 'Detention Redemption' quotes in it. I love that episode, I love Rily and I love Lily-denial.

And now I'm going to go back to mumbling "Wow" and "Oh my God" and add this story to my favorites list.
sexyviolinist chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
omg! so0o0o0o0o0o0o0o sweet! im a total Lily/Ray shipper! huzzah! great story! cheers.
anonymous chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
You never cease to amaze me. Like I said before you have a gift. After i read your kim fan fic i had to find the other fan fics you wrote and this was never stop.
lunarlanding chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
Radio Free Roscoe is one of those fandoms in which gems are incredibly hard to find. This is one of those gems. You convey such complex emotions with clean, simple words. Just lovely.
RilyFanForLife chapter 1 . 2/25/2004
LOVE IT!
RayLovesLilyForever chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
Great story!
softballcoconut chapter 1 . 1/26/2004
its really good u have to write more omg!
renisanz chapter 1 . 1/11/2004
very well written.
twirlgirl04 chapter 1 . 1/10/2004
Absolutly beautiful...
I really think that little fics like this that leave you thinking are sometimes more worth reading than some long novel about who took who to the dance. Just my little bit...
Anyway, the writing was gorgous. Keep it up!
Kuro-sama chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
That was confusing... O.o;
AKADropsofJupiter chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
You. Are my new. Goddes.
This story is so absolutely beautiful. I love it. You are awesome!
My favorite bits are: "You know she sees every look that lasts a little too long, and every friendly hug where hands wander a little lower than they should." And "Denial isn't so bad... Alright, maybe it's a little bad."
It's halarious stuff!
There isn't enough second person fanfic out there, really. Just... ah, can't stop gushing. I hate giving reviews where all I say is, "U R Awsum!1!" but it's so fitting! :)
nicole chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
Such a beautiful fic! We definitely need more Ray/Lily fics! Excellent job :-)
mistress of the universe chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
aw! a fic? just for me? thank you whore! :-D
and it's even a GOOD one too! oh i'm so excited. i knew i could get you hooked on RFR if i tried. anyways, good work! i really like the idea of this fic, with the second person narrative and whatnot.
oh, and extra points for calling me the reigning queen of the RFR section. :-)
*love* your favorite whore
P.S. Actually, I'm more of a R/L shipper if i think about it, most of my fics are R/L, with the exception of Paper Moon, which is just crazy.