Reviews for Understanding Steven
ackeberlynn chapter 14 . 11/28/2010
You have a gift for suspense. Ever single chapter was absolutely, nail-bitingly gripping. I have never read a Third Watch story with more depth and suspense. This was a true thriller. Realistic, too. Excellent writing.
bovary chapter 14 . 4/30/2010
I've just re-read this story and I keep enjoying it as much as the first time.

Thanks for it!
Cuddy Cabin chapter 2 . 3/11/2005
I forgot about this story until today and had to read it all over again. Man! I forgot how absolutly, without a doubt, unbelievably awesome of a writer you are!
radioactive.raccoon chapter 14 . 3/9/2005
wow..

bosco angst gotta love it!
skinny chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
where's the rest. I want more PLESE! Just to good
Stangchica2003 chapter 14 . 4/8/2004
good ending. nice touch to the whole situation making cruz be the one to kill him...
faithinFaith chapter 14 . 4/1/2004
wow! I can't believe you really shot them all...This was PERFECT! (except for Cruz being the hero...couldn't she sliped on all the blood and cracked her head or something... ;) ) Anyway GREAT job! I could hardly breath there for awhile :)
sarah chapter 14 . 3/30/2004
WOW! I started reading your story a few hours ago and COULD NOT stop reading. My back and butt are so killing me right now. I just had to tell you that the story was SO AWESOME!
Lucygoosey chapter 14 . 3/28/2004
Anyhow, it was a good ending, even if Cruz did get to be the hero.
Nice story.
Elsandra chapter 14 . 3/28/2004
Interesting ending, nice twist! All in all, good story that kept me interested. Good job.
Mattycakes chapter 14 . 3/27/2004
NO! I never hated her before, but now I DO hate Cruz.
*sobs*sobs* Shoot... I really thought you were gonna let him go. 'course, then I'd beg you for a spin off fic where he comes back... *sighs* I kinda figured it would end sadly.
*sobs again* Aww, so sad... poor little fella... I loved the whole "Understanding Steve" bit, that was ingenious.
btw, California girl? HEHEH! I'm in Cali... her name isn't Matty by any chance? Or Nicole? Or Rebecca? ;)
*sniffles* Okay... it's really over? Does it have to be? Any ghost stories you can do? *sighs* Oh, alright... fine... I'll stop now. *grabs a tissue* No more crying over spilt milk I guess... still my most fav story, even though you killed him.
dixie chapter 14 . 3/27/2004
what the heck happened to chapter 14 - it was poorly written and there is no way gussler would be able to shoot four officers and remain unharmed -
i got the impression that you rushed this chapter (especially the ending) because you didn't want to be bothered continuing - i'm very disappoined since you did great until around chapter 12 or 13! what happened? i feel robbed!
Orison chapter 14 . 3/27/2004
Wow, that was one intense chapter! I wasn't expecting ALL of them to get hurt but I?m glad Cruz saved the day. Someone had to, and I'm okay with the fact that it was her.
Great job and can't wait to read another fic from you! ;)
Malinda4242 chapter 14 . 3/26/2004
Okay, that seemed a bit more than rushed considering the care and consideration you put in all the other chapters. LOL BUT that you made Cruz the heroine? I will forgive the rushed ending. LOL This was a really good story and I hope to see more from you soon!
M.
anon3908 chapter 14 . 3/26/2004
Must sleep...so it's gonna be a short review, sorry! Great ending, I liked it a lot! Loved this story, good ending, great job!
-FPP
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