it's a great story

omg... i was part right about neville...

i thought it was Neville. now i am glad he wasn't. ..

i knew it Neville was xander... since the polyjuice potion scene, i doubted of him...

i still think its just rude not to tell truth to hermione... if she knows about bet, how can it be a real friendship? she ll think harry's friendship with her is a complete lie... its a heartbreak i would never want to experience...

This was fabulous... I enjoyed reading this a lot, the only downside was that Hermione seemed too much of a damsel in distress though this fic was unique to say the least... I haven't read any of this kind! So, good job:)

Ch 8 is the most dumbest chapter ive read. I mean the 2 are the snartest students of hogwarts yet none of them thought to use the summoning charm or accio? This sounds like a highschool movie cliche. This js supposed to be a magical school for christ sakes so magical solution to every problems!

ok two chapters in and already like what you seem to be doing here, Harry more cocky and a obviously Hermoine more like how Harry is in JK version. its clear where the problems will be up ahead in the future. And the biggest plus is that the story is complete so i will not end in a cliffhanger that will never be solved

wonderful read nice plot twist shame I read the reviews

I like it.

If you're not able to tell by the emojis I've selected, I quite like the story line.

I think this is so sweet and sad, I feel a lot like your Hermione, except I don't even have a Neville. Great story, keep writing.

Oh my God I knew this Ginny was a perfect match for this Neville but I didn't think they were that compatible for each other. They make me want to kill them just in disgust. Stupid idiots. It's people like this in the world who makes me wonder why they even exist.

This was a great story. It had its flaws, but it grew on me.
"Now, I'm going to end it short and sweet"-
IS WHAT I WOULD SAY IF I WAS THAT KIND OF PERSON!
Instead, I'm going to review your writing in a unique way, I'm going to score it. You start with 100 points. You lose points for bad things, you gain points for good things.

Current points (CP): 100
Damsel in Distress Deduction: - 50
Comment: I hate it when the main female character is a damsel in distress. This ancient style of writing needs to be taken down. I'm not asking for a Mary Sue, (the result of what some writers and movie makers do to combat the damsel in distress) all I want is characters in general with both strengths and flaws, like canon Hermione, canon Ron, and canon Harry.

CP: 50
Sub-canon Material Subtraction: - 40

CP: 10
Plot-Twister Points: 45
Comment: Oh, how I love a plot twist! Ever read one of Jennifer A. Neilsen's books? I suggest them. She is awesome at playing with who you trust. Not that I don't think that J.K. Rowling is a queen of writing!

CP: 55
Heart-Breaker Bonus: 30

CP: 85
Page-Turner Points: 20

CP: 105
Construction Skills Cut-Back: - 20

CP: 85
Fails to Deal With the Dark Lord Deduction: - 30

CP: 55
Profanity Penalty: - 20

CP: 35
Witt Beyond Measure is Your Greatest Treasure: 50

Final Points: 85
Wait! You're still reading? I'll give you 10 more points for patience.
Actual Final Points: 95

I had a real adventure reading this, and I'm sad to leave, but as Sirius said: "The people we love never truly leave us.", and I have a feeling I'll read more of your work soon. Don't stop writing and dreaming!

~Mischief managed!~

It is short, but it's good. Even though Ginny ended up evil, my heart breaks when I think about her fate. Why did she have to be evil? WHY?! I guess that it had something to do with the fact that she didn't have Hermione to tell her to not give up on Harry, but see other boys. Also, Neville didn't have Dumbledore's Army. He also didn't have anyone to talk to about his parents. So, for me, this story's real message is:

THE HARRY POTTER UNIVERSE NEEDS HERMIONE JEAN GRANGER TO SURVIVE.

~Mischief- actually managed this time~