You are sick...great story thanks for giving it a ending

interesting

Holy crap!

Wow... That was... maddening?

But I liked it...

Evil, very evil

You wrote very well getting mad just right can be tricky but you pulled it off.

Sometimes you need a story that lacks a happy ending, and I loved the dark Jak bit at the end, it really mad e you realize that damn that IS the end.

Thanx I enjoyed that.

Wow. That was an intense story. Very well written. And what an ending. Dark Jak, going to kill them all... Wow (Again). Have you written Any Jak 3 stories? I didn't notice. I am going to look again, though. KEEP WRITING!

You know, the entirely not-funny thing about this is, just last night I was bemoaning the lack of GOOD reading material on The JnD section in particular, that writhing bowl of snakes! With bad taste in writing! And I was like HRM. I want SOMEONE to update AE. ‘Cos it’s the last chapter, JUST HOW LONG IS THIS THING GONNA TAKE?

Lo and behold o_o *kisses feet* Im sorry it took me so long to review, though! Same with you- I knew it was there, but never had time to FULLY appreciate it. So here I am now! :3

AGH IM SO EXCITED. ‘Cos I know this is gonna be as disturbing as all HELL. And I need a bit of disturbing stuff to get working on my fic again XP A kind of chapter title such as RELIEF just… *SHIVER* Jak’s gonna die ;o; That’s the only way relief can be brought in a hell such as this.

And Daxxie’s gonna be the one to KILL HIM WTF BBQ WAH!one! ;o; NOO! *DAIE*

And I tremble at what this ‘naughty thing’ will be o_o It frightens me.

AND I START TO WEEP! T_T Poor Jak! The display of… I don’t know, the lack of ALL hope is really heartrending. He KNOWS he’s as good as dead, he KNOWS there’s no escape- but the darkness is making him stay till the last. AND UGH. When Dark talked through his mouth and stopped the WONDERFULLY twisted and inventive attempt to slit his wrists… Ugh, mass shiverage. Silky voice? UGH.

Jak’s whole thought train- the simplicity of it is disturbing, and truly HIM. You gotta admit he was a little insane in the first place, but this is just marvelous.

…AND DISTURBING… I get confused, very much as Jak is, but this is psychotic XD He FINALLY finds water, and what happens? His inner demon breaks free. WHOOPIE. It was just… ngh. Not happy o_o

I simply adored Daxter’s extreme dedication to finding Jak. XP *giggles* Just precious. BUT I WORRY FOR HIM! *yeeks!*

And I have right reason to o_o AGH! I loved the brief moment of LETHAL disappointment when Dax thought Jak wasn’t there. It was like… AGH! All for NOTHING! *sob* And I was sad. I was. UNTIL DARK JAK CAME. AGH. SCARY. And its so… FITTING, cos I’ve ALWAYS seen Dark Jak having a plain ol’ obsession with everything Jak called dear. An obsession to destroy it, of course, and this is just… *SHUDDERS* ARGH! Not good! FIRST nearly strangled, then kisses BUT BAD KISSES and.. *whimper* That shouldn’t have made my tummy jolt like it did. BAD DEMZ.

AND OH NOEZ! ;o; *QUE LOUD INCREDIBLY SHRILL SCREAM* NO! NO! NO!NO!NO!NO!NO! *nose glued to the screen* AGH that’s so sick. THAT’S SO SICK ES, DO YOU HEAR ME! Daxxie should never be a toy… ;o; You just… made me squeal and squirm! BADLY!

Ohpleasegodno. You killed him. YOU EFFING KILLED DAXTER.

*SOB*

Oh god the visuals are chilling. Jak’s hand going… IN. UGH. OH JEEBUZ. This is horrifying! And sick! And wonderful in a very very very bad way ;o; The contrast, Jak’s pitiful, mindless expectations of Dax, the way he turned so cold after being so warm, the lack of sorrow in face of COMPLETE insanity- IMEANJEEZ! *pants* And then… and then… his realizations of what Dax meant to him were just.. NRGH… and THEN…

… Okay. So… you had Jak kill himself. Either way he dies.

But… okay. How could there possibly be an epilogue after something like this? YOU’RE SO MEAN ;o;

And yet you know I respect you with unwitting vigilance. Because… this truly WAS an outrageously amazing story, and I adored it till the end. The end itself held a sick, sick grace, and was just as beloved as the rest for its unconquerable sickness of WOW.

… I’LL MISS YOU… ;o; Im so sad to see this at an end! No more AE for me! *SOBS and clings to ankles* BUT I LOVED EET!

*curls around the story protectively* It shall always have my love :0

HOLY SHIT.

...

Wow.

Now I think I can write again.

*meanders off mumbling*

...

O.O

I have... no idea what to say...

I dunno if I liked the ending or not. I think I did. Not what happened *weeps*, but that it suited the fic. And, thanks to you... I now have images in my head... Ew... Hands are NOT supposed to go IN peoples chests. Lol... But HOW IN THE HELL DID THE DEMON LIVE! Its not fair, that JAK died, and the damned dark side is STILL ALIVE! I am almost positive that Im not alone in saying, an epilouge would be about the BEST thing in the world right now. ... leave us all hangin' with endings like that will ya. But, this has to be one of the best Jak and Daxter stories I've ever read.

*too lazy to log in* Ok, so I read this chapter last night, and then re-read the entire story (including the final chapter).

It was incredible. Yes, I guessed you were going to kill Jak off months ago (as you well know), but I didn't realize Daxter was going to die too! *cries*

This chapter was very long, and a perfect, appropriate ending to a perfect story. You've been able to capture their pain so well; it's almost as though I'm feeling it too (like the part where Dax was dying of thirst...my lips began to hurt _).

Also, you had me totally prepped (sp?) for a super horrific scene, but because of it, I wasn't too surprised. It didn't sound like what you were suggesting (though the "mine" thing creeped me out. Zombie Jak!). That part totally scared me though; it felt like I was Dax. Sorta. _;

And lastly the finale. You. Made. Me. Cry. It was so sad! The part where Jak was holding Dax in the dark was so traumatizing, cool, and amazingly written all at the same time. I was shedding tears! I can't even explain how I felt as I read the final scene... it was like I was in denial along with Jak.

Yeah. But with a final note I have to say... that despite the pure gore, blood, and horridity of the whole story, it was beautiful. A beautiful story. Truly magnificient, well written all the way. And *cries* I wish you hadn't killed Jak (though you had to...to make the story work _

Oh my god, you fricking killed everyone off! *grins* It was pretty cool.

Womann-nn -_- *WHINE* I read halfwayish through this before bringing up a comment window, cos Im just a late starter like that- but SWEET LORD JESUS. Did you... HAVE to crunch the little boy? Did you? Really? PLEASE? I mean, that was just SICK. . Like, delicate-little-Demz-having-a-fit sick. I whined! I did! Urrgh. Yich.

The Dax-angst at the beginning was vurreh well-merited :3 Poor boy, having to off his best friend when everyone around him is lying. *shakes head* Jak didnt deserve that... but I always find it interesting how people view Daxter's two years. You put it SO much more realistically, but at the same time over the top with the... *twiggles fingers* icky... smacky-crunchy child-beating guards. Yeah. Scary. WONDERFUL superimposition and view on Daxter's guilt when the kid's face was Jak's, though. Yay! :9

Once again, beautimous view on Dax's coming to find Jak in the fortress. YOu just make it all so powerful! *GAPE* :0 The concept of his radiating power translated into tangible form by his voice must've been so... TRUE AND INSPIRED XD It was just awesome.

BUT BY ALL THATS HOLY, I ADORE TESS. God, she's so SUH-WEET to her little Daxxie! _ I love the boob-mooshings. I love them. Love them good. And the way she's so attatched to Dax? (NEVER romantically, really, 'cos Im dead sure that she would still view him as an adorable little pet if he got turned back!) But the way she'd practically do anything, and do it all so innocently even though she KNOWS how to use her body to her advantage, it just got me squealing XP OH SHEEZ I HOPE SHE'S JUST OKAY ;o; If that guard hit her, problems will occur. Cos Demz will go ballistic. *nodnod*

BUT HOORAY! Daxter is off! off'n runnin' wiff a BEEIIG KG hellcat! Jeez I hope he.. he HAS to find Jak, but dangit theres only one chapter left ;o; Please. Please make it end happily. Please for hte love of all thats holy, you cant've lead us through this for a sad ending.

PLEASEILOVEYOUUPDATESOON. .. AND END AU.

Shite thats a scary thought.

WOW. this is beyond words! I feel bad that I've read all this and I don't have much to say for it... I REALLY wanna see what is gonna happen tho. I'm really hoping Dax dosent have to end up killing Jak. And when Dax acedantally used the white eco, I was wondering for awhile there if he was really naked or not. I was right! **dances around** Poor Jak, I wanna give him a hug, but so did Keira, and that ended up swell... lol. Update soon! And you deserve a big crate of pocky, and coockies, and stuffs...

W00t! I thought you wouldn't update, and I was terrified. Out of my wits. Forever. Except that forever just ended about fifteen minutes ago.

Yay! I am so happy. So happy that...I'm gonna go work on my story. Yip! ::scuttles off::

::pokes head back around the corner:: Oh...and I suppose Tess will never get over the habit of stuffing poor yet blessed Daxter's face into her chest. Lucky, pitiful guy.

wow...all i can say...wow...you write the most kick ass fic ive ever read!i love it 100%! i am looking very forward to the next chapter!hurry...i love da fic!dark jak should be in full control just for some flava...lol,more please!

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As usual, excellent chapter! I love how you put phrases and idioms that pertain to Jak&Daxter (ie the yakows and Mar references). Not to mention the flashbacks are awesome.

Can't wait for the next. Even though I know what's going to happen. _

I'm not entirely sure what to say. As usual, I absolutely loved it, and your writing style remains gorgeous and flowing. But poor Tess. Poor Daxter. Poor everybody. I wish I could know what the end was, but that's not mine to have.

'A Favor House Atlantic' would be a good one for your listening pleasure. Try downloading it.