aaaaa this was a really sweet story jkdsnfkds

i love this story.

what a great story! engaging plot, just the right amount of romance... and your story-telling/narrative was wonderful. ah, but the ending. i guess we love peter pan because of the ending, though, right?

again, i really loved this story. bravo : )

That was such a gorgeous moment at the end, I'm sorry it took me so long to read it. Amazing job.

-SAT

umm . . . its very good (but i havent finshed) , but i'm a bit confused,

in chapter 4, wendy said that she couldn't swim:

"But Peter, I cannot swim." Wendy said, following him closely.

And then in chapter 9, wendy said that she coiuld swim:

"Can you swim?"

"Well, I haven't for quite sometime now... but I believe I can." Wendy replied, somewhat caught offguard by this sudden question.

please explain. thanx!

~confetti . . .can't b bothered to log in~ XXD

I love how the imagery and description. :)

Nice job.

Again, very good. :)

Excellent story. :)

I didn't realize, when leaving my prior review, that this was a completed story. I admit, I'm disappointed. I do not feel a sense of closure. But, the story could have been left open ended for a possible sequel, if you chose to do one. That, and in all honestly, Peter Pan stories shouldn't be completely closed, if the writer has him return to Never never land.

I'm rambling now.

Point is, I wanted to come back, not only to thank you for the pleasure I've received in reading your story, but to find a semblance of closure, for myself, with the story.

Take care.

good story keep going with it

If ever a story has brought tears to my eyes, it is this one. My heart simply broke for them, again. Your chapter is rich, bitter-sweet, and full of heart breaking saddness for them both.

I do so look forward to your next chapter.

As always,

Until next time . . .

AW! So sweet! *bucket-full of tears flow* *sniff* Anybody got a tissue? Beautiful, sweet story, Chibi*Keeper! I hope to read more of your stories in the future! God bless!

Sincerely,

Allura Arwen

It's so good to see YOUR Story return, I thought you had abandoned it. However it was a sad chapter. Could you tell me if it happy ending or not. You brought THEM see each other again so please don't have THEM apart.

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aw...(tears)...how sweet!. Great chapter...really excellent!. Your really great at this!. Please update soon...I hope that isnt the end of your story!.