good job

What a way to end a story? I can't believe that I only just found this one! Wow that was really great. I really liked the end, and I am dissapointed that there isn't more! Good work, really left me wanting.

I don't even know what to say about this amazing chapter. God...I have never really seen Tom and Mina as a couple, but this seems to work just fine. I felt as if I were reading some fantastic poem that never ends...and I was begging it to last forever. Simply wonderful. I absolutely can't wait for more. Loved the end with the soft words between Tom and Mina. Dying for more.

I really loved this! I like your writing style, its very fun to read. Definitely one of the best Mina fics out there. Will you possibly be adding to this? I hope so, this is so excellent! The line "I can't give, or you can't ask?", makes me want to read more! perhaps theres hope for them? lol, im really getting into this. Once again, great work!

Jesus, damn and wow... that was one of THE most amazing things I have ever read. I don't know why but the style is compelling. You bring a new light to Tom, an intriguing and exciting one at that, and the way you write Mina is sheer excellence. I do hope you're going to write more like this in the near future, and you can guarantee I will be there to read them.
As for my favourite line... well being a performer it had to be 'If the world is a stage, then none of the players know their lines.'
Excellent work. I bow to you.
Clez

Wow-very cool!
At first I thought it was weird how it was written (the present-tense style) but you're so good at writing anyway, it didn't matter. ; Another chapter? Pwease?

Oh, that's fascinating. The only problem I saw in it is that there were times when it looked like you might have dropped a word (I do that all the time myself) or made a slight spelling mistake (lack instead of back, for instance: "Tom lies on his lack and stares up at the reflection of the ocean dancing of the roof through his single window.") But it's very intruguing and lovely nonetheless.