this story is slightly urealistic because remus would never approach Lily like that because he's a werewolf and doesn't think anyone wants him and is loyal to James

I always thought this! James is a complete bastard! Infact I think he with Sirius probably made the 'marauders' just to manipulate,control and use his friends where Sirius was his partner in crime and he is also the most horrible bully. I feel like gagging and vomiting when people sing James' goodness! Thanks for writing him like this.

Wow! I love this! could you do a Sirius x OC fic? I really like the humor and you have hardly any spelling mistakes.

Oh snap- the drama! I wonder how this is going to turn out...

NOOOOO, you can't have Remus and Lily be in love! That shipping is just ugghhhh. Plus if Remus and Lily were to say, have children, none would be Harry POTTER and the whole Harry Potter series wouldn't happen because Harry wouldn't have been born. Then he wouldn't be the chosen one and everyone would be doomed since Voldemort would destroy.

But nice story though.

Haha, I always liked Remus the best. ANs in the middle of the chapter are kind of a turnoff, though. Thanks for posting!

James created a polyjuice potion and 'aged' it. Which says something. He actually created an aging potion. Hence the drowsiness. lol. Poor Remus.

Fantastic! but where is Something Like Betrayal?

I just screamed! for real!

Soo glad shes still with Remus! Great story

James is an arrogant jerk! The king my ass. Lol

Hahaha Lily! Go girl!

My friend convinced me to read this story because of a scene in this chapter. Its hilarious!

Sirius is a freaking ASSHOLE! omg he got me soo angry!
These switching always get me confused trying to keep everything straight but I love them anyways lol

Ugh james! You are such an ass! Leave my Remus alone! Can't believe he did that. Lol.