Oh wow. That was absolutley terrific. It really kept me hooked right up to the end. It was very creative how you made this. I enjoyed it a lot. I know this was published a long time ago, but is this ever going to turn out to be more than just a one shot? Anyway, terrific job!

The final battle between good and evil. (sigh) Quite poignant and beautiful. He's trapped within his mind, but he still reaches out for her. Lovely work.

that was sweet. I'm not big on warfic, but I must admit - this was executed very, very well.

So. *bounces* Is there gonna be more? .~

~trieste

wow! beautifully written.

Wow... Very well done. I'm impressed. Original idea, kept me wondering. Is it a one-shot? Could be developed into something... Excellent job.

My goodness. That was just . . . completely stunning. I'm not a big fan of Draco/Hermione, but stories like this one make me appreciate that the pairing can definitely be written plausibly.
The tone of this entire piece was just so fascinating: very still and quietly hypnotic, with a hint of an almost blinding brightness. (And aren't I going horribly mushy and pseudo-poetic with my descriptions? Sorry 'bout that. :D) Beautiful, beautiful description here. It was just so . . . I want to say lush, but it doesn't seem like the right word. Very quietly and subtly perfect.
Very striking and beautiful.
'There is no room for love where they exist. The wind is always shifting.'
Those two lines are so, so perfect. Can't even express how amazing. Definitely some of my favourite that I've stumbled across in fanfic. Or, well, in general, really. :-)
Beautiful, wonderful, amazing story. You are one remarkably talented writer!
~Nita

WHOA. I have to give kudos to you for this one, I really liked it. This song absolutely rocks as well... being a great lover of angst, you captured it perfectly. Great take on D/Hr.