Its been forever since I read this fic and I do mean forever. The first time I read this it was still the old version. I must say, I like this one much better. Update soon _ Ja.

The ending part of this chapter was very poetic.

really great story

Thanks for updating. I really like your fic so far and I hope you can have the next chapter out soon. It has been a while since I found a good GW Fic so I am looking forward to reading more your story.

What a way to ruin a good sunrise. Wonder how the 3 who rescued them will react to this.

Wow love this wish there where more...

It's been a while , but I do remember this one. Doing much better this time around, but please don't rush on your editing. You've got a couple of tense errors and misspellings that are just noticeable enough to throw a reader off the story flow while their brain processes what is meant to be there. For instance, in the second paragraph of this chapter, I'm pretty sure you meant "Passed", instead of "Pasted". One generally doesn't "Paste" time. Threw me for a bit of a loop before I reread the sentence and realized what was off; and while the "soup" in Wufei's eyes in the shower was an amusing mental image, I think you meant soap. Like I said, just enough to throw a reader off for a minute, but it does detract from the more serious tone of the story. Other than that, the pacing and character development are much better than what I remember from the first attempt. Keep up the good work!

Oh this is a pretty interesting story. Too bad I didn't get to read the original to tell you how they compare. But that's ok, because I like the flow here. Love the emotion you get tot he reader through the words, found a few typos "croak of Duo's arm" crook... I sent you a pm of what I saw, i hope this helps and that I haven't offended you. But I do really like this story and would like to see where it goes. :)

Woohoo! Duo the protector! :) and he's hurt id the pooling blood in the tank means anything. And who shot the evil doctor before he could finish his spiel? so we get to the last two standing, Trowa called Duo a boy, but not much younger than him... so how old are they? I thought they were at least in their early twenties.

I hope you are doing well and I look forward to reading more of this story! Thank you for sharing :)

Interesting story. waiting to see how this unfolds.

I really do like your stoey, but again, you didn't describe how Heero and the others got Duo to stand down! That was the part I was waiting for. As is, I hope you keep updating. You might want to beware of too much info and descriptions, they can bog down a story and make what would be something fun and interesting, rather dull and boring.

Poor Duo and Quat. Hopefully Wufei can keep that promise with the others help.

Hmmm. I just found this and it's quite lovely. I so look forward to what happens next.

I'm so glad you came back! I had given up hope of it! I appreciate the fact that you are expanding on the story, many parts in the original could use it. The next chapter should be awesome- what with Trowa and the other talking Duo down. You skipped that scene in the last one. I can't wait for the next update! Read you then!

Now it's getting exciting. The cast of characters is present and a mystery is about to unfold. I hope you continue and update this very soon.