Awwwww poor Revan so heartbreaking and terrible. At least now she has Carth and he's real thank you for this sad and beautiful story

THIS IS AN AWSOME STORY! I LOVE IT! its better than all those other ones!

:)

It's hard to forgive the Jedi Council for what they did to Revan, former Sith or not. Seriously. Inventing a past that never actually happened? Lying for months about her very identity? Nice move, guys.

Lots of people are hard on Carth for his reaction, but i find it hard to blame him; after Revan, the revelation hit him hardest. Nice to find a fic that gives him a really positive reconciliation with her.

To be posted 2 Apr 2010 on StarwarsKnights under The Critic returns and Lucasforums under the Critic’s Two Cents.

I will tag those I liked as pick of the week. Check at StarwarsKnights for the best of the best.

KOTOR enroute to Manaan: Revan and Carth deal with the revelation of her past.

There is a little box here that tells you how many stories an author has posted. WysdomsGirl only has one.

A pity. I would have loved to see more of this author’s work.

The piece rips into the façade created by the Jedi council, reduces it to shreds, and still isn’t enough to fight the pain. Having Carth accept her so readily is a bit much, but knowing how much they had gone through up to this point his volte face when he discovered she was Revan was a bit over the top too.

Pick of the Week

Oh my gosh... I loved it! It made me tear up, it is beautiful!

aww...that's so cute.

This was such a gorgeous story! It was so cute ... and real. I think that's how anyone would react to being told that they were some insanely evil person and everything. You did an awesome job with describing the scenes. Sweet work!

That last line was really lovely...the entire concept is frighteningly accurate...

This is really good. I loved it.
I just got to the Star Forge system, myself ... in the game I played (I don't know how everyone I've talked to said he didn't) Carth forgave my girl for who she was, almost immediately after they got off the Leviathon.
But that might just be because I'm strange. My girl has Dark Side Force powers she could use without any trouble (even Drain Life), but she was pretty far into the Light Side when she found out who she was. Or maybe they'd already admitted they really liked each other by this stage.
Anyway, I loved this fic. I especially thought the idea of them creating mementos for her was good (in the well-written way - it really was quite a manipulative and nasty thing to have done) - I never concidered it, but now I do wonder why she seemed to get over it so quickly in the game. I mean, it didn't seem realistic, now that I've read this.
Thanks - I really enjoyed reading this.
VMorticia.

Very, very touching.
Well done!
I wish to see more of this.. Maybe Chapter 2? To be honest.. I think it deserves a PG-13 rating.. R is a bit too harsh in my humble opinion.. Three swear words! Get with it! When I was 13 I was a dictionary of swear words :). Plus, R fics go unnoticed for some reason.. Sod's law, I guess.
One criticism.. Nothing too important. When you use fullstops you fail to put a capital letter on some occasions after them.. I don't know if you were intending to use a comma instead..?
I don't really enjoy criticising.. As I make so many mistakes myself..
One a great note though, you have a fantastic and varied use of vocabulary.
Well done :). Keep writing. This one is going on my Favourite Stories list.. In hope of a Chappy 2 :.