Oh no! They've come this far, evidence of the torture in the Abbey was seen on screen as Kai revealed his back, everyone has his loyal bitbeast again, Tala should be able to return to his senses again in the end after this ordeal and ... and...
The chapter ended...
last updated in 2015...
...
Please, please grant us with another chapter to make everything right? ::is actually down on her knees, begging:: Seeing you updated your profile last year I still have a tiny bit of hope. Certainly now the members of H.O.P.E. ought to get together again. ::has faith Tala is strong enough::

I truly enjoyed to read this epic story again, it truly is marvellous! Justin is utterly adorable :D It's such a relief Ray caught him falling down, otherwise the cliffhanger would've been killing me.

I'm crossing my fingers you'll manage to writing an end
but I want to thank you for writing and publishing the chapters up to now anyway,
I'll be sure read them again and again.

Lhune

Blazin Shadow...
The fic is AMAZING
When are u going to complete it?
I'd love to read the story till the complete end
You know...if u write books n publish them, they'll be famous
For sure

What. The. Hell.
I haven't read this in probably three years and this is what you give me? Are you trying to give me a heart attack?!
As usual you never disappoint! Love it all and always have. Can't wait for more. Hopefully it won't be another three years, huh?
Ja ne
Miz

huahuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
si eso hubiera pasado en la serie mas de uno nos hubiéramos infartado
estubo buenísimo
espero con ansiedad el sieguen te capitulo

I was sooo into this fanfic! AMAZING! But no conclusion yet? Even a small happily ever after?

Well... I don't know how I stumbled upon this story in the wilderness of cyber space but I'm glad I did. Because this piece of writing can be categorized as some of the very well-written stories that capture a reader within their addicting world. I am a writer as well as a reader so when I am introduced to a good story, my instincts can recognize it as a finely crafted treasury of words. Your story is no different than this. It is packed with suspense, action, humour and emotions. Friends and enemies are portrayed very well, although, the dialogues could use a bit of trimming and polishing here and there. Also... a suggestion for the layout, if you start writing author notes in bold or italics, it'll help the readers decipher the beginning of chapter from your notes. And you can make headings like chapter names, etcetera etcetera prominent like that too.
Talking about the actual plot now, it's splendid! It almost reminds me of my own beyblade fanfic that you can find on my profile. You have weaved the pace of story very well. The events don't seem to transpire very fast or very slow. You've maintained the flow of your story in a fantastic manner which is what drove me to review it. Well... normally I'm very generous with reviews. But anyway, a story should be worth reviewing. The theme itself should scream at readers to review it and share their sentiments about it. I believe this is what makes your creation special.
You have made the characters act out themselves. It's a notion not many understand, but when I read this story, I could picture it all happening, how the characters worked, how they appeared to be actual people rather than just mere fragments of a story. That is a fabulous job itself, my friend.
Keep writing without hesitation and do justice to your talent as you are doing,
Hope.

Man this is getting good and can't wait to see what happen next! Great Job!

*gasp* Oh no! Tala! I'm sure he won't die like that.

I had to re-read the first two chapters since I forgot what I had read and what it was about then I jumped to when Kai had his breakdown and read on from there to the end.

Keep up the great work!

Cya

OMG I saw this on my email I can't believe it you'r back! Thanks you so much for coming back to this stories!

Omg I wasn't expecting this! Thank you soo much for taking your time to give us another chapter I appreciate it and pretty sure everyone else too! And now hopefully Tala wont die!

Hi! update soon.

I read this store aging I love it! I still hoping that you can come back and finished it.

I wanted to said something that I forgot to mentions in my last review XDDDDD

Kai...

He will never hug anything unless it's an animal :))

(Watch g-revolutions (Japanese for the ending version) after that you know what I mean XDDD)

Hi! :D

Will you continue the story please! XDDDDDDDDD

Please don't leave us hanging! You have to update!