* looks hopefully for next chapter* you mean thats it? I... :(

but it's wonderful! it's really, really wonderful! i've been chewing my nails and getting chills and..and i freaking love this story!

*checks date* wow.. i'm behind the curve, it's been years. I bet you don't even see this. well, I wanted to say that your story was really well written- with grammar!- and the plot was amazing, and.. i wish i'd known about it sooner, so i could have read and reviewed each chapter as you wrote it...

thanks for writing it, even if you didn't get to finish.

hna

O.O omgs u has to continue it! please!

~Sayo-san09~

Great story, so going on favs. Plz update soon!

xxDarkness' Kidxx

OMIGOSH THIS IS AMAZING! *is glued to the screen* Write more, please! *cries* I'll give you a puppy! *holds up stuffed dog* Please?

SWET! OMFG CONTINUE *foams in teh mouth* XD! UPDATE NOW w00t! *hugglez u* best story EVA!

This is an AWESOME fanfic! Please keep writing! x3

THIS IS SO AWESOME! Gosh, I know I already reviewed but I got to where you last updated and wow! It was brilliant! I can't wait for more! Thus far in every chapter you've had me glued to the screen bitting my finger nails to peices! :P I give you another huge thanks for not making this a Yamato/Tai slash thing! XD Also, I really think you did a great job with Tai being freaked out about a mob being after him, though you can never have too little of that remember! :P Can't wait for more, this is so great! XD *does dance* *bribes with cookies to write more*

Yes, I am reviewing before I've reached the most recent chapter, but I couldn't resist! This is such an awesome story, you got me completley hooked to it! And it's amazing! You wrote a fic where it's not romance between Taichi and Yamato! *glomps* Thank you SO much for that! This story is my absolute favorite of any Digimon story I've read! Thanks so much for writting this! And finally here's a fic that has them as friends! WOOT! Fwee! It rocks! :D

_; Well, you asked for constructive critisism, so I guess I shall give it to the best of my ability. Something I'd really like to see in this (And your other stories, depending if they're in the same format) is some sort of seperation signal such as a set of -'s (ie: - ) between scene changes as well as seperating your replies to reviewers and the A/Ns. I think it'd make my reading process much easier, and I'm sure at least one other person agrees. o;

Also, it'd be nice to see some mental collapse with Taichi. Having a mob after him would be much more terrifying than you make it seem, and while it's too late to go back and change the chapters to have a much bigger, more dramatic response, you could still have an after effect. Explain it by saying Taichi was in shock, or some such thing. :) It does happen, y'know? Plus I'd adore seeing a crying Taichi moment, where maybe Yamato or Hikari come to his aid and give him a shoulder to cry on (preferably Yamato ;P).

All in all, this is a WONDERFUL story! I really hope you keep it up. :D I adore the plot and aside from what I listed I adore the writing. Please update soon!

.. hey! you can't leave off there! that's not fair! Suspence is bad for people's hearts! You're on a great roll, and it's really god, but PLEASE PLEASE don't leave it like this!

that was too good. any idea how long itll be? i hope u get inspired soon. congrats on the laptop! update soon as u can.

i like this story a lot. i like the direction it seems to be going. Cant wait to see what you do with this.

That was really cool and cute chapter. please hurry up and update really soon please I cant wait to the next chapter to find out what will happen next please. and good luck with your story and the next chapter.

love dragi

O.o WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH MY YAMA?

Yamato: I'm not yours...

Oh, yes you are -smiles madly-

Yamato: O.o -scared-

BWAHAHAHAHAHA!

Yamato: -slowly walks away from Windy-

YAMA! COME BACK! YOU HAVE TO HELP ME!

Taichi: What have you done Windy?

hehe, I scared Yama to death

Taichi: You KILLED Yama? -strangles Windy-

X_X

Yamato: Now we have to do the review Taichi... well done.

Taichi: Well, you know what she thinks, right?

Yamato: I got no idea this time, she never had a chanse to tell me...

Taichi: But doesn't she thinks something like "Lovely! Update soon, or something really bad will happen with Yama"?

Yamato: She finished thinking that way since I'm stronger than she is, and I'm imortal.

Taichi: geez, stop bragging 'bout THAT!

Yamato: I'm better than you Tai! You're just the Fire, while I'M both Water and Wind!

Taichi: Oh, wait... If she can't do anything to you, that must mean... O.O! -runs away-

Yamato: Yeah, Windy really loved this, and if you don't update soon, she will make sure something really bad happens to Taichi. -looks at Windy- And she wants next episode to be longer I think that covered it up.

-light goes out-

GAH! STRÖMAVBROTT! -flyger upp och landar på taket-

Yamato: WINDY! NOT SWEDISH! And the review is over.

But I haven't said anything O.o

Yamato: We did it... -hits Windy in the head-

x.x

Yamato: The end...

This just might be because it's an awesome song, but i think the Raxhephon theme goes good with this story! _ I like it! Don't leave it hangin' here!