| Reviews for Final Worlds |
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  just a reader chapter 3 . 3/14/2004 Odin is scary...i've only seen that one shot of him in the managa at the end of book 3 and i'd never think he'd be that scary. However i like the story very much and i'll look forward to updates! |
 Lafine chapter 3 . 3/13/2004 Yup, yup very exciting. Can't wait for the next chapter. You're considering to make a doujinshi out of this story? If you do, please tell me O |
| Ytak chapter 3 . 3/11/2004 Dun dun dun! I am enjoying this story. I'm not too crazy about cliffhangers but I do admire a well placed one from time to time. I can't really predict what is going to happen next so don't take too long putting out another chapter. |
| Rikuu44 chapter 2 . 3/11/2004 _ Hee hee... Can't wait for the next chapter! This fanfic ish very good! I love the detail and they're so much like the anime/manga its amazing! XD Yay LokiXMayura! |
| Fruit chapter 2 . 3/10/2004 Nya, you must update, I must know what happens!~ Update for I'll. . . throw stuffies at you. . . |
| ShuiMei chapter 2 . 3/8/2004 Wai~! Write & post more soon please O_O |
| Arysta chapter 2 . 2/11/2004 Ah... very interesting! I want to know who the weird guy is who kissed Mayura, of course... your characterization is good, if perhaps a bit too comic-y for my taste on Mayura's part. (Not a dig, just a comment.) I really like the story so far, though, and like your writing style. Keep Writing! |
| GoodGurl chapter 2 . 1/31/2004 HEY! Who dares kisses Yamato Nadeshiko? (as Freyr would say! LOL) and who is this guy? Theres so many guys hitting on her! _ interesting...but I thought she belongs to Loki! ;) |
| GoodGurl chapter 1 . 1/31/2004 Woah...interesting! I wanna know more about this whole thing! I hope you also explain on who that girl was at the end of the anime series! _ And woah whats this ring thing about and...okay am gonna read the rest! LOL |
| ginny chapter 2 . 1/17/2004 excellent fanfic. excellent writing. I don't know, I just read a few fics before this and this fic was like a miracle compared to them. It has the perfect balance of dialogue, description, and action. I also appreciated the fact that it's nice and spacey. I can't stand it when fics aren't paragraphed or spaced correctly cause it hurts my eyes. Im taking bets on Odin. Looking forward to next chapter! :) |
| Typist Massacre chapter 1 . 1/10/2004 Oi Vchan. This is getting really good, I take it you did some serious Norns Mythology research before making this. Even better. Can't wait for Chapter two the LokixMayura parts -FAJ |
| Aeris chapter 1 . 1/2/2004 Oh wow! This is certainly one of the best Matentei loki fics I've ever read (also considering the fact that there are very few that are actually good). But even still, I'll still be reading your fic anyway. I also like how you portrayed the characters; other fics that have loki and mayura pairings are almost always cheesy and out of character, you know? Like in your fic, I can definitely see Loki acting that way (what with his ever present smirk and arrogant attitude, heh!). The pacing of the story is also remarkable. I don't like how other writers like to hasten their plots. I like yours, slow yet detailed. Please continue! I'll be waiting! |
| elenasun chapter 1 . 1/1/2004 This story is interesting, please keep writing. _ |
