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qblisa chapter 2 . 8/4/2006 What a beautifully written mini-story. They are both too stubborn! I felt empathy for the heartbreak they had. I kept hoping one of them would take the risk and say something... But they are both too proud and hurt. Wonderful. Thank you. Lisa :) |
xofalling2deep chapter 2 . 5/20/2006 I nearly cried when I read this. This was wonderfully written, I think it was amazing! |
daejonerys chapter 2 . 2/21/2005 Well, that was depressing. But I liked it anyways. Good job. |
Cpt ahab chapter 1 . 5/24/2004 :-) like the writing love the writer |
Amalia Kensington chapter 2 . 4/10/2004 oh my goodness. wow. this story is actaully making my heart hurt. it's so...rawly emotional. the thought of both of them being so broken and that they both care about each other but there's too mcuh betrayal between them now. it's like Jack and irina's relationship... will you do anything to make this work? *laughs* actaully, i like unconventional endings, even if they do piss me off. :D anyway, great job. cheers. -A |
LilsurferSango chapter 2 . 2/6/2004 OMG! that story waz so sad, but it was great! If you ever decide to continue it from some new idea that pop into your head or a sequel please email me! You did such a great job, I'm gonna give you any kind of cookie you want. *holds out plate of cookies* take all you want. This stroy was so sad, and the angst was great. I felt so sorry for Sark. Loved it. ~Mel~ |
quicksilver angel chapter 2 . 1/14/2004 aw...that's so sad...please put sarkney back 2gether. i reali luv yor story |
TrueCat chapter 2 . 1/14/2004 OMG that was so good and so sad, are you going to continue it or just leave it there? Damn it im trying really har4d not to cry! Thank you so much! |
Fanatic482 chapter 2 . 1/9/2004 This was just... staggering. Honestly, I don't know how you could ever possibly put this little ficlet down. It's gorgeously written, beautifully detailed, and executed with perfection. It's heartbreaking and tender all at once... adored it :) |
allyispy chapter 2 . 1/8/2004 hey dat was really really good. r u gonna get dem together in the end coz i think u should. well i want them to get together in every book. |
scarlett21 chapter 2 . 1/8/2004 This is really good! Keep going with it...I totally want more! |
magicwillow261 chapter 1 . 12/31/2003 I think this is really good! I wish there was more to read! I think you did really well with this. If you think that this is "a mess" and that your others are better, then they have to be just as good! I really like this! Keep it up! |
fairieangel chapter 1 . 12/30/2003 Hey! I really liked your story. Great writting in my opinion! Lydia |