Interesting story. Some parts made for much OOC, but quite a number of aspects of the plot were interesting. It was clever the way you had Akane mistaking Ryoga for Ranma. The M-rated scene was ok, nothing to worry about. I very much liked you chapter 5 with the resolution of the P-chan problem. It was well balanced. And I found the epilogue very smart too.

It was great to take a trip down memory lane and spend time with these characters. Having one of the fiancees snap and make a serious attempt to kill Akane was a great idea and there comes a point in any Takahashi series when all of us have yelled at the screen in protest of yet another interruption or misunderstanding that kept the featured couples apart so it's always good to read fics that cut through that nonsense.

Oh lovely loved it

I love the story XD

When I love a couple I am a diehard for them and reading about one of them ending together with someone else is painful for me... I wonder why? Well... I am also a diehard Akane/Ranma fan... and I love the story XD

Now thinking about Kuno crazy talk, maybe he was hit with a Shakespeare book while someone was reading Romeo and Juliet when he was a baby XD After all his dad is nuts xD

Dude! I hate ryoga! ! He is a asehole! All he does is acuse ranma and daydreams about akane and taking her away! And he's p-chan! I hate that! I mean he's seen akane undress , hear her secrets and sleep in the same bed with her and while she is not noticing! He doesn't deserve akane at all that clueless map hater jerk! That being all sweet thing is just a act! GRRRAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!DIE RYOUGA! ! You suck, damnit! Rot in hell you perverted pig!Boo you stink! Bleach! Go to a butcher factory already! Muhahahahahahahahahaha!other than that great story!RANMA X AKANE FOREVER! !

enjoying this the way a cat enjoys a fresh catch.

yummy... a ranma and akane story.

thank you

I am a diehard Akane/Ranma fan. I don't even read fics that pair them with anyone else. A universe where those two don't end up together is a paradox

I agree too.

This story is so sweet.

Good chapter, it's starting off very interesting.

aww its so cute! i keep reading this :D

lolz Ukyou's in a mental institution... XDD nice ending, but I relly think that Ranma's not that much of a sap... XD XP but oh well!It worked out for this story any way! XDD

holy crap... you do NOT know how much I hate ryoga!

You just made me hate him MORE in this story! XP XD nice i like where the story line's going!

wow this is a very amazing story and how you take things from a bit lost to being found i love the way your story seem to flow to one scene to another. great job.