hey...i saw this fic on another site *squints eyes accusingly* you didn't steal this did you? except the one i saw was longer, wut you have is just a snippet of the whole thing...anywho, i liked it, but i've already read it...bubye!

vivid, in character.. wow.. its really good thats all I can say.. you tend to swap between first person and third person though.. you aught to pay attention for that.. but as for the writing? its just fantastic the way you weave it together. of course I have memorized the start up since im such a freak and am obsessed with the game but this really puts a great new perspective on it..

Two years is a very long time to have to endure stuff like Jak did. I, personally, would have died.
I've tried to capture feelings of angst and despair like that, but never been very successful(although, most of the stuff I write, WHICH IS NOT ON HERE BECAUSE AS OF TODAY THE STUPID COMPUTER WON'T LET ME UPLOAD IT... as I was saying, most of the stuff I write is angst, it is kind of bad but I don't give up) Anyway, that is only like one of the greatest stories ever. Yeah.

0.0 GREAT STORY! I LOVE ANGSTY STUFF, PEOPLE GETTING TORTURED AND KILLED! GREAT! i know, i'm different. great, i absilutly loved it! it's really great how i can find people who can write great angst to were i also feel the pain and hatred. ooh! i shiver just to think of it! this was so deep, so angsty, so, so, so AWESOMELY AWESOME! GAH! great fic! i can't tell u how much this fic rocked! oh my god did this fic rock! and on a lighter note, i now must write more to my jak and daxter humor fic! but first...READ MORE ANGSTY STUFF! MORE TORTURE, MORE DEATH, MORE BLOOD, MORE HATRED! i'm usually like this. don't be afraid. i don't bit...hard...heeheehee! nawh! just jokin! i don't like the taste of human flesh. ICK! heck no. sorry, half dog, half wolf demon. well, KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!

Just read this for like the 5 millionth time.
Awesomely awesome

Great! I love angst stuff. I really liked this. I'll be looking forward to ur other fics!

I know, I know, I keep reviewing this, don't I? But I can't keep myself from reading it over and over again, so I guess I'll review over and over again.

;-; This story is beautiful, and you are quite a talented author. I really loved your story. I can't really put it into words how it made me feel. It's just got so much raw emotion. I really really liked it.
I'm going to be saving this story forever. I really hope you keep writing stories of all varieties and one day get published.

*sob, sob, sniff* That was so deep. I love the parts where he sees Daxter's face in the wall and * sob, shudder* reaches out to touch it and it isn't there, and the part where he tells Praxis he will kill him. It was beautiful, eloquent, lovely, and all of the other words used to describe great stuff like that.

This is one of the most eloquent things I have ever read. It made tears come to my eyes ( embaressing because I am in the library). I do not consider myself an expert on such things, but this is one of the greatest things I have ever read concerning a PS2 game.

Another deep tragedy of Jak's life in prision. Jolly good!
*Keep on the feeding...*

That was very descriptive. I like it. I've written stuff about varios Jak 2 and Jak and Daxter characters but never sent any in. You obviously have a talent for that type of thing. On a scale of one to ten, I would give it a ten.

whoa, totaly deep dude...awsomely sweet!
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oh my this is very good! I love Jak-torture/Angst!

*sobs* that was so sad. Poor Jak! I loathed Daxter for a few moments when I saw how long it took for him to save Jak, but then he said some funny line and I forgot... but you reminded me!