sé que no me entenderas pero... aun asi.. ENSERIO ME ENCANTO TU HISTORIA! D FUE GENIAL! ABSOLUTAMENTE GENIAL!

Sora: estubo de lujo

ella es Sora, mi conciencia, en verdad... felicidades, ha sido el fic de spiral suiri no kizuma que me ha gustado mas.. y he leido como treinta, bueno, nos vemos, espero leer otro fic de tu parte... otra cosa, traduce esto con el traductor google [ ?hles&tabwT# ] si es que no le entiendes, goodbye Hime-chan

i LOVE this! :D This is so adorably cute and ayumu and hiyono were so in character. I loved your writing style - really fluent. They were just the right length, too! :)

Thank you for writing this! It's the best hiyoxayumu fic i've ever read! :D

great story 3 i like ayumu's thoughts, his doubts, and everything. and i like the way hiyono is understanding and soothing and - wonderful :D

that was sweet

AW. ITS SO CUTE. I LOVE IT.

One of the best (if not, the best) AyuHiyo fanfics out there. The two are in character (and yet it forms a good story, which is quite rare).

Now if only they made like a special based on your story...

Anyways, much love to the story and kudos to you for making it!

aw, that was soo cute. gotta love narumiXhiyono. :D Spiral is awesome! lol

-nao-chan

oh my gosh!

this story is definitely one of the best written fics in anime/manga history. The storyline is definitely different from most fics of the couple I've read. The play of words used was utterly phenomenal. Would you care for a career in the Marketing industry? o

Hope you continue writing stories with as much depth as this one.

Au revoir mon ami ! Merci pour l'histoire merveilleuse

I can't believe I never reviewed this! It's been forever since I read it! Great job.

aw i LOVE this couple so freekin much but there arnt enough ff about them :'(

that was so sweet i loved it xD

I bet you haven't gotten a review for this in a very long time.

But I find it utterly adorable and very close to the canon characterization. Wonderfully written. And I'm kinda sad that it didn't last more than the 2 chapters.

I love this story/It's very cute and funny.I wish they did end up together in the anime C

This story is so cute! And it is my favorite story in Spiral fanfiction. Keep up the good work.

Aww! I've never read a AyuHiyo as beautiful as this T_T! I love you, and I love your fanfic ;O;!

Ayumu is too pretty TOT! I can't explain what I feel~ but...I love him ! And I really like the pair that he do whit Hiyo-Hiyo!

Well...that's all XD sorry if I hace any mistake in the review, but I speak (and then, write XD) spanish, not english uwuU.

I want to read more AyuHiyo from you ;w;!

Kisses and hugs :3!

omg! this is so cute!

i really like it!