Keep going, this is a really good story! I can't even find anything wrong with it (which is saying something, because there's some really bad writing out there). Very interesting, I'll be waiting for your next chapter!

I really like this...I got a little lost halfway through it, though...what was up with the no civilian casualties thing? *gets lost easily* Maybe I just skipped a paragraph or something...
In any case, I hope you write another chapter to this cause I like it )

aw man, that gets deep, i can really connect with you man, im a percussionest too, 2nd chair in stewart county high school drum line, im the only quad player (except for the other quy, but he majors in sax), anywho, i know how it feals, competitions and all, heh, anywho, good story ,i gove it a 10 outta 10, p.s. the morals you live by are honest and true, _, treat others as you would like to be treated is one of the most powerful morals in the world, uphold it man, good luck next marching season, P.S.S. stewart county is in tennessee, the so called "hump" of tennessee, (check a map), well good luck _

i love the fic. keep it up!