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New reader-God all might!I love it...which is hard for me to say.I love Pyro but they make a better couple:cringe:

But Mag's kneeds to back the FUCK away...that cock juggiling thunder cunt o!

New Reader... WHAT THE HELL DOES MAGNETO WANT! STAY AWAY FROM SUCH A WONDERFUL COUPLE

YES. THIS GOT UPDATED. PRAISE ALLAH.

I thought you DIED. Here I was, already claiming stuff that I was planning to...erhem, TAKE once you had died. But that will no longer be necessary.

Eh. Even with your long absence from touching this story, I still kind of remember what's going on. PIE/PY LURVE. And sex. Maybe. I'm hoping. Because sex...makes even a six month delay of this story's update seem like two days.

Wow. I just realized that I haven't reviewed, like, ANY of the past chapters. Where the hell have I been?

I had a fleeting thought for a second that magneto was going to molest John. I don't know why. If Pietro's conscience hadn't kept screaming

"Why the FUCK is father so damn close to OUR John!"

that thought of mine never would have occurred.

You know what else?

“Remember when you were little and were bad and I tied you up and didn’t let you move?”

INNUENDO. INNUENDO. INNUENDO. So. He tried to molest PIETRO TOO? No wonder he's got such an eye for younger men and sodomizing them.

ARG. DAMN YOU PIETRO. when a man says he loves you...you make DIRTY, WHIPPED-CREAM INVOLVED LOVE TO HIM. That's how it works, you stupid, confused bastard. I mean, for God's sake, he had a friggin' wet dream about you. Now if THAT doesn't just scream, "FUCK ME, YOU SON-OF-A-BITCH", then I don't know what does.

...this review is fucked up. I'm just going to...frolic off before I say something more messed up -;

Glad to see you're planning to update this more! I CAN'T WAIT.

reviewing...why did Magneto tell him he was going to be gone soo long, and how the hell is he going to know if they do something while he's gone? By the way, like your style of writing.

JESUS FUCKING CHRIST! I THOUGHT YOU HAD ABANDONED THIS FIC!

You know, my stalker gave me whaite chocolate for White Day.

the chapter was good

ZE! SIX FUCKING MONTHS FOR A BLOODY CHAPTER!

swoons and kills Magneto AND PIEPIE WAS JUST GUNNA GET CHOC TO SLATHER IT ON JOHN'S CHEST!

AH!

...you could spin it off and make it a Magneto/PiePie one.

Heh.

Huzzah! Yes update this again soon! Or you know, any of your stories. *luffs ju*

Oh, my good Lord. XD

I love this! PLEASE, GOD, WRITE MORE LEMON WAFF. PLEASE.

But anyways...yeah. XD The Father of the "Bride" coming in and strangling poor Pyro...awwes.

Anyways, PLEASE write more! :D This fic fucking rocks.

Now please excuse me while I rampage through DeviantArt looking for Pietro/John slashpics. . *whoosh*

Cool! The saga continues! Hurray for plot twists! Update soon! .

holy crap that was hilarious. Poor Pyro, he can't even get any in his dreams. The image of Pietro in a naughty nurse outfit is going to haunt me for the rest of my day. Damn you. hehe. And Magneto getting all psycho was really funny. Excellent job.

*screams* ZE! *glomps* Zee, where did both of "Story Times" go? WHERE? Because I need to review, but-but-but...THEY"RE GONE! *whimpers* But hey, short but sweet on this. And a plot twist! EI! XD XD XD XD XD

ANYWAY!...um...*whimpers* Where did they go?

-Rose

NO! Magnuts, you ASSHOLE! LET PIE AND PYRO'S LOVE LIVE ON! *cries*