Reviews for Disappearing World
DangoCorn chapter 1 . 2/10/2015
The way you write is beautiful ;;.
TNB chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
sucked not a zoroXrobin fan at all
batgirlraven17 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Wow, I'm so surprised you haven't gotten more reviews! I think this is great! Robin you're so tense, loosen up a bit huh? I know Zoro will help her get there! Still doesn't change the fact that she's badass! I like the way you had Zoro think up a answer for her. And then of course he goes to sleep. Classic Zoro.
minyng1005 chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
WOW!~~ Another great story! Keep writing these RobinxZoro fics. I love them. I think Robin and Zoro are meant for each other. ZoRo. First 2 letters of their names. RoBin. Last half of their names. THEY WERE MEANT FOR EACH OTHER!
Angie-chan chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
Ooh, I enjoyed this. Very interesting.
meethzoonk chapter 1 . 7/22/2004
oh.. extremely well written, i must say.. just beautiful... beautiful... :3
AnimeFreakPerson chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
*gasps* So... Well... Written! I wish I could write like that. *sighs* So descriptive too... What's the first set if this is the second?
neonate chapter 1 . 4/3/2004
This story had been in my fav. list since I joined ffnet, but I had known of it even before then. I had re-read it several times over and it's about time I give it a review.
Oda-sensei had never explicitly said that Zoro is the "emotional ballast" of the crew, but we know that it's true and he portrays him like so. Not until you so aptly write it down, did I realize how important his job is.
That also brings me to Ch. 309 or Ch. 308 of the manga where Zoro for once showed how much one can rely on him.
I do not speak much of Nico Robin, because I am afraid of deciphering her too much. But I need to speak out about Zoro, because you point out something very important about our fav. swordsman. Excellent. Thank you for fusing such quality into OP.
Sherry Marie chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
This is fantastic. I really want to write a good review, but I'm feeling a little speechless right now. You are an incredibly talented writer.
There were so many wonderful lines that caught my attention and made me stop to reread them. Theses are some of my faves.
"The green-haired boy watches the crew and pulls his weight quietly, a strong backbone to a ship that would capsize without him, the emotional ballast."
"Brusque. So young, so hurried. Niceties, a pleasant play of tongue in cheek, fangs hidden in sheathes for the right moment; honesty, a forgotten body at the bottom of the sea."
"She turns and regards the green-haired boy, the steadiness of his eyes reassuring, the confident smile meant to be comforting. She tastes the honesty, so new and different, like honey on a fresh slice of orange, bursting on her tongue and lulling her into belief."
Breathtaking use of language and description. Your prose takes on a poetic turn, that makes it beautiful to read.
I love your take on the characters. Zoro is my favorite, and I think that you did a great portrayal of him. I also love your Robin; a character that I haven't had nearly enough exposure to, but enjoyed her here within your story nonetheless. These two make a great pair.
Please write more!
cool-girl1 chapter 1 . 1/29/2004
WOW! AT LAST SOMEONE FINALLY! FINALLY! MAKE ZORO/ROBIN FANFIC! It's so cool PLEASE CONTINUE! ONEGAISHIMASU!
BengalCat chapter 1 . 1/10/2004
wow, not bad. would you mind going on...?
Delas chapter 1 . 12/29/2003
I liked it. You have an interesting way of writing. It all sounds... poetic, and it gives the story a nice feel to it. Very enjoyable to read.
Link and Luigi chapter 1 . 12/29/2003
You better believe Zoro has a job! Though, many people may like to deny it! (Like me sometimes.)
This was very well written! Very nice! Even me, a person not too fond of Robin, enjoyed reading it!