Wow, this is neat. I love Otto love stories! (I'm writing one myself)

Don't make this story your only and last one! Do more!

That was so sweet and romantic, and I am floating on the ceiling, that was so good... -

Oh...me like.

I just saw Spider-Man 2 and am officialy in love, or lust, with the Doc. I think there should be a page for Spider-Man:The Movie fanfiction. 'Cause I'm exploding with ideas.

OMG! This story is so 'cute'! I must admit it is a little rushed, but who cares right?

“Would you follow me, if I asked you to?

Hmm Different indeed. Though I'm not that much into romance... blech.

I love Spiderman 2, as soon as I saw Dr. Otto Octavius... I liked him. He's my all time favorite villian!

Aww, how cute! I just saw spiderman 2 today, and immediately fell in love with doc oc... isn't that sad? anyways, great story.

Good grammar and wording, but a wee bit rushed. Interesting, nonetheless; it's about time we saw some decent Otto romance. ;)

Pretty good. I'm not too much of a fan of the more steamy stuff but it wasn't to much. Also I would like ta see more. I feel like the entire marvel verse could be flipped up side down with a twist like this.

Oh ho! Pulling the moves on Otto, are you? Well let me tell you something, miss, I think you'd better keep an eye on this one.
He's bound to break your heart sooner or later. ;) Entertaining read, thats for sure.