| Reviews for Living inside Yesterday |
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Fl4v1nh4 chapter 6 . 7/30 I find it very creepy that Ginny looks like Harry's mum and maybe Grandmother(if Vergia is the grandma in this story)... otherwise no complaints hah |
GINEVRA chapter 19 . 6/24/2012 I love the story so far! Its awesome! but I think you should remember some of the little things in your story from the books. Sorry for nit picking but thease really bother me: Ginny is Ginevra NOT Virginia and I got that from the books when Mrs. Weasley is yelling (and she yells "Ginevra Molly Weasley!" alot in the later books especialy) Fred is Fredrick NOT Alfred (again from Mrs. Weasley) and in England they would give Alfred the Nickname Allfie usualy. Then you got the spells for picking some one up buy their ANKLES mixed up with its counter curse and BY THE ANKLE not like someone is using them like puppets with strings. also they wouldnt do that because the death eaters at the QWC used it on the muggles. Ginny is Ginevra NOT Virginia (sorry that realy bugs me) I love the story dont get me wrong, but like I said thease things always bug me, but I think thats mostly because Fred dies in the Deathly Hallows and Ginny is my favoriet character in the books other then Harry and the rest of the Golden Trio adn Names are how we idntify the Characters so getting them wrong is like totaly re-difining the character. Love the story glad you have continued (I started one of the others by accident)and I cant wait to continue especialy with the surprise plot twist you have included so far! |
fan-freak121 chapter 1 . 3/21/2011 love it. |
Adonish chapter 1 . 7/9/2010 I rather feel like you are trying to hard to be funny. You dont need to try so hard. I doubt anyone will be reading this for its jokes and not the actual plot. |
AryaAliceLuna chapter 2 . 1/16/2010 Hahaha love this! |
dristi chapter 21 . 1/12/2009 hi, wonderful story! will read the sequels as soon as possible! keep up and thnx for this amazing story... |
Janet Beavers chapter 14 . 8/20/2007 Oh, please! There is no way that Harry and/or Snape would stand around inside the Riddle House arguing with the others. Hello! They would be concentrating on escaping! You should work on your characterizations. That is, your characters should act and respond in ways that make sense for them. This means that Harry, who is on a rescue mission would be concentrating on rescuing. |
Wingsofthefae chapter 21 . 8/18/2007 This story is incredibly confusing, incredibly funny and just plain incredible. I like your caustic, one-liner sort of style, because you make it an easy read without becoming boring. I'll read the seaquels later, you've gotten me hooked. Since I'm one of those people who like to pair everyone, I'm wondering about Hermione. In this story, there's a lot of potential on the SS/HG pairing (kinda gross, but ah well), but I'll read the other stories to see more. I really liked the way Harry and Ginny got together, in the books it was so shallow and well, blergh. HBP is my least favourite book, JKR does NOT know how to write romance. That being said, keep up the good work _ |
Ysarose chapter 21 . 7/25/2007 This was good. I love the Tempus Fugit spell... *dances*. Thank ye! It would be great to have more time taking a test! *chuckles* I shall get around to reading the rest soon hopefully. - Miss. |
twindevils chapter 17 . 4/6/2007 Did you know that a sequence in mathematics is "is an ordered list of objects (or events). Like a set, it contains members (also called elements or terms), and the number of terms (possibly infinite) is called the length of the sequence. Unlike a set, order matters, and the exact same elements can appear multiple times at different positions in the sequence." Where as a series is the sum of a sequence. So each story is made up of a sequence of spefic events that can be repeated. When you put all the stories (sequence of events) together it is a series. |
kaitlyn chapter 21 . 3/25/2007 i LOVED that ending! with the wizard of oz video! wow. it was great. |
kaitlyn chapter 18 . 3/25/2007 i didnt get the crying thing. why was it so funny when ginny was crying? |
Motherlyclucker chapter 21 . 1/26/2007 I liked it, even with all of those Wizard of Oz references! It was good! Sincerely, Motherlyclucker |
witches with awesomeness chapter 21 . 8/6/2006 You are one of the most awesomest (not a word...o well!) writers out there! I love ur story and especially how u qoute things from books, songs, and poems! any way even though I believe Ron and Hermione are PERFECT for each other, I do like how you did Ron and Luna! and even though i think you do ALL the charactors (Harry, Ron, Luna, Hermione, Ginny, Neville, Snape, Dumbledore, Voldemort, Malfoy, Sibyll, the marauders, Cho, ...Colin! and well everyone else!)as close to how JK writes them as anyone I know, you still manage to have a Ron and Luna romance when in the books I don't think they go together... Hm... what else? O Yea! I love how you had Ginny take Harry to the rainbow and then harry confessed his love to her (and her to him)! And I love that YOU SAVED SIRIUS! :-D and that Luna CUT VOLDEMORTS THUMB OFF! LMFAO! That was hilarious! and I love the 'Time Flies' spell! Thats awesome! and that Harry's ansesters look like him! (or rather he looks like them!) And I love how you had aunt Petunia give Harry money for Ginny! I always thought she was nice deep down! And I pretty much just love this sequence! KEEP IT UP! |
karma11 chapter 1 . 6/26/2006 awsome! |