And I thought I was the only one who thought of this pairing! Whee! Excellent work, and love the twist at the end!

Wow, that was quite interesting. I must say that it was your writing style that struck me the most. You've got a real flare for words. I hope you've written more!

This was a good one-shot. If it was one... I kinda just clicked on it cus it looked interesting... I don't know who Kishimoto is though... _ I have to look it up... I haven't seen past episode 14 and I can only assume it's the guy from Kaoi's First board in the tournament that I have yet to see the end of... _ I guess Mitani loses. AA well. I still like him... and KAga... but that has nothing to do with the story... -_-
Owari. Juunko. Igo is where your friends are...

I like the way you write. Really interesting portrayals of both Kishimoto and Mitani here-I'm not very good with characters other than Hikaru/Akira/Sai, though, so I can't say how accurate or inaccurate they are canonically-and you write their dialogue in a way that's refreshingly realistic to read. Short, and I'm not sure I got all of what you wanted to say (my fault, not yours), but I definitely liked it.

M.. very... how shall I put it...CHARMING. Yes, that's the word to discribe this sweet little vinigette.
Nice twist at the end, it had me in stitches for ages MitaniXKishimoto :)
Wonderful story, I'll be looking out for more stuff from you!
*adds to author alert*

Painfully short but amazingly well-written. You caught a really harsh Mitani, and although Kishimoto was a bit OOC, I can actually picture this scenario happening with Mitani. More works from you, hopefully! :)

Finally, a Mitani based story!
... anyway, I thought that was written really well. It was a good length, and had a good twist in the ending. I really like how it was drawn out. More, onegai?
-AlienYak