| Reviews for Come Undone |
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   Jemma Blackwell chapter 1 . 12/29/2010 You just write 'twisted' so well it's scary. I love Sirius but I don't know that I could have done anything for him during those dark days, he was such an intense individual. I wrote a one-shot about Sirius, if you be so kind to read it. It covers that year before he fell through the veil, and then right after, when we weren't entirely sure he was dead...(denial springs eternal...) |
| SlytherinRiter chapter 1 . 2/3/2010 heehee- loverly. Makes me giggle! |
| Potterworm chapter 1 . 12/9/2009 Amazing. |
| werewolfsfan chapter 1 . 10/1/2008 I'm an absolute sucker for "missing moments" like these. |
| loveoftoday chapter 1 . 8/23/2007 I'M the one who's been charmed. Your SR fics are godsends. |
| ttfn.tahtahfornow chapter 1 . 7/25/2007 Hah! Very funny and cute. I loved it! ] |
| Pixy Black chapter 1 . 7/19/2007 THis is such a cool story! Are you going to do any more on it? |
| levisrictusias chapter 1 . 7/4/2006 Very good indeed! You haven't written a Remus/Sirius for a while! This is me poking you into doing so: *poke* So...so there... |
| Blurred chapter 1 . 7/20/2005 E. D Another lovely R/S. |
| Lady Darcy-Riddle chapter 1 . 12/31/2004 Sigh, and I thought it had a sequal. Is there some longer r/s fic hiding somewhere? Hm... who's acting like a 22 year old now. Burn table cloth burn! Am not understanding Tonk's reaction... but am guessing she already guessed and therefore is not very surprised. Hmm. took too much thinking. |
| Melanushkia chapter 1 . 4/14/2004 Nice, very nice, i have suspected all along... |
| Loony chapter 1 . 1/19/2004 well...it isn't bad...but I don't like it very much...maybe because it's Remus/Sirius and nothing about Snape...but Tonks was great |
| dragongirlG chapter 1 . 1/6/2004 Wow, this is great. Very sweet and funny; I love your characterization of Tonks. Lovely piece! |
| Fanfiction Addict chapter 1 . 1/1/2004 I like your writing style - very descriptive, very comfortable - and it's a relief to see slash on that's well-written and doesn't involve smut or sensationalism! However, not much actually happens to engage the reader, and I didn't come away from it feeling as though I'd been given a great insight into the characters of Sirius and Remus, or into the relationship between them. I think it could do with a bit more depth - perhaps some more about the contrast between the past Sirius and the Sirius of today? I like the line about Sirius's 'incurably bad language', though, and this is much better than most of the HP fics on . Good work : ) |
| Abigail-Nicole chapter 1 . 12/31/2003 I liked this. I don't usually like slash, but despite the title this had the humor element that made it funny enough. It was odd, sort of angst/humor combination taht I loved. Great story! |
