OMG I love it!

waiting for the next chapter

oh my... I've been readin' and y need to tell you it's interesting and funny. you're really an amazing writter hehe seriously hehe don't give up

I cannot wait to read the next cap hehe

if you find a grammar o writing mistake it's very easy i'm not amarican or english or a english speaker hehe well i guess that's all. see ya

geez...that last sentence sure gives a gloomy and bad sense of forboding. but other than that, this is a brilliant story! i mean it! the plot's really, really original - like the fact that there's an inner dragon of heaven in kamui just like the dragon of earth within fuuma. and they love each other too! not to mention that seishirou and subaru are back together. i think i fell in love with this story that you wrote. i do hope that you'll update soon. i very much want to see where the plot will go...keep up the good work!

Oh wow...please update...this stories amazing and I want to see the end...I know its difficult to pick up a story after years but please try.

Oh wow, you haven't updated in 2 years! I really like your story, and I really hope you'll update it very soon!

04-30-06! (

GREAT story!

I want the next chapter TT

are you going to update?

Finally you updated! You know your Fanfic is really-really-really-really good but, why so long with the updating?I've been waiting for ages T-T. but neverless I love the idea of and his twin star are lovers .ANyways Keep up the good work!I'll be cheering 4 you!

Wow...This is the first fic that brings lovely Kamui back into the picture without being absurd...I love it and is one of the few times I will love to see a happy ending.

Beautiful concept the one of the love between the Kamuis and the power of the wish of both humanity and earth upon them.

I really hope you continue this fic. Your plot and narrative are amazing. great job :)

e-mail me when you update because I'll kill you if you don't! Rawr! You can't just leave a good story like that hanging!

And this is still not quite the end. Gah. You're worse than me in updating! Haha but I certainly can't fault you on that since it's the fault of studying and education eh. Ha.

Ehh, pretty good I guess. Writing could be improved, however. Details, details... Otherwise this has caught my interest.

Do update soon.

Oh Lord! You finally updated! I'm so happy! I was almost screaming when I read the alert on my email! Great chapter, go Seishirou! He saved the day! I wanna read more! Indeed college is evil, I understand you, but i hope you update soon. Want more FuumaxKamui! plz take care!

damn, i'm too lazy to log in. But oh, gods, I was so happy to see this update! I almost deleted the notification I got before I realised what it was. Oh, you got lucky I noticed the subject line. Oh, my gods, I friggin' love you.

I can't wait for the next chapter. This one made me so happy. but poor Fuuma got hurt. Glad he's okay.

~Karen

The first thing I'm going to do is commend you for walking the fine line between plot-contrivance bull* and an actual well-thought out plot while bringing back Kamui AND Seishirou AND Kakyou AND making the Light and Dark Kamuis love each other AND explaining all of it while it's going on. That alone is very impressive.

That's not to say there aren't problems, mostly mechanical. When you have a dialogue and one character speaks and on the same line you have the reaction of the other character, it can be a little confusing.

Well, this story has taken a few hours out of my life when I could have studying, but it was time well spent. Also, if you need a beta reader for this, I would be more than happy to do so.

I just stumbled upon this, and I must say that I'm *very* intrigued. The entire concept is very interesting and original. You've got some grammatical errors here and there, but it's nothing screamingly bad. (Hell, I'm certainly not claiming to be a master of it.)

I just love the Fuuma/Kamui bits. I'm a complete and utter sucker for that pairing. (And the Dark Kamui/Light Kamui thing? I think I might explode from fangirlism.)

I'm not going to screech at you to update because I know how annoying that can be, but I'll be *very* happy if you decide to continue with this soon. I'm adding it to my Alert List.