Please finish the story

I don't know if you are still writing or will ever read this review but I felt compelled to write it. This is a great story and I have read it several times. The story line is believable and realistic. If Harm and Mac had gotten together, I don't believe they would have given up on each other. This is one of my favorite stories. Thank you for sharing with us.

Very good story, really enjoyed reading it. Made me think, and actually see and feel the pain that they were going thru. Thanks for sharing.

Wonderful story! Thank you for sharing your talents with us! I hope this note finds you well and happy!

its a good story but i would like to see the deal complete

aww that's the best story, i really like it, and i cried 2! It was so good

great story.

Wow, nice and happy story. It's pretty good too

This is an amazing story! I love how you went through all the character's emotions. I almost cried when I read what Mattie was thinking. Thank you for your hard work. I'm off to read more! :)
~Mac

I loved little A.J.'s point of view! Nice ending!

You are GREAT! this story is so good! loved the end!
Lady Cherry

OMG how sweet can four year olds be? Little AJ was adorable! I loved these past two chapters! I can't wait for a next one! Update soon!

I lkie the turn of events this story took. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

oh man this is great! please continue!

i love it it is also so sad i hope ur planning on having harm make it back because i believe i would cry my heart out if he didn't!