This is a great story ! I know it has been awhile since you updated here, but I wondered if this story has been completed somewhere else ?

Hey, this story is pretty good. I know it's been a few years but maybe you could finish it. I bet you rescue Nicky in one chapter.

p.s. Danny boy would make a good lab rat for Natalie's cures.

More.. more please hurry up!

This is a wonderful story so far. I think you have done great job portraying all of the characters and I am intrigued by the connection between Nicolas and Natalie. I have always been a fan of stories dealing with the turbulent relationship between Lacroix and Nicolas and your story invokes all of the love/hate aspects that make a great story dealing with this.

Has this story been completed? Are you planning on continuing it? The end of chapter six is a very cruel place to leave off...Please continue!

Please, please tell me there is more coming! This is very enjoyable and I need the ending. LOL Phylis

Hello! I've looked and looked for a completed copy of this story...guess there isn't one.

I really am enjoying it. I know you haven't worked on it in 1.5 years, but I am really curious how the story will work out: will a prolonged absence of Nick from Nat break the condition she is in?; What exactly are her abilities? Can Natalie fly on her own? Can and will she go out in daylight? She should be able to follow her link to Nick. Don't give Daniel 10 million...he's such an evil brat.

I hope to hear from you soon! Either in an update or email?

Innogen

Great! I'm waiting for more!

Please. What happens next! I hope your schedule and muse allows you to post more chapters soon. Keep up the *veery* good work. Zafaran

zafaran at fastmail. fm

Ah, NiteMar is your muse? She is one of the originals of FK world in N&N fiction. I miss our group. :)

NUTS rule! ;) Glad to see the legacy is still going! Great story!

This is really good. Please update soon.

This story is so awesome, this is just how I would like the show to continue. I just bought the season 2 dvd and it made me want to read some good old FK fan fic. Thanks for the memories!

This is fascinating. Just finished watching the DVD 2 collection and need more Nat and Nick stories. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I am enthralled! Please post more soon! I miss the show desperately and love to read good fanfiction about it - especially Nick and Nat centered where LaCroix is not as evil as he seems.

Great story! Please write more!

I love the story so far. I didn't see past season one really. We had to give up cable...But I have seen some eppisodes here and there. I always had an uneasy liking for LaCroix and I really feel that you are doing him justice. Please update soon? Please?