This was an interesting read. Different. Thank you for something new :)

I liked the piece. Your writing style iss also good.

*_* That was one heck of a story... *glomps it* Mind if I steal this fic? ~ *tries to sneak away the fic in pocket* ...okay, okay. I just love well-written horror.

Poor Ryou, though... why do we always enjoy so much torturing the ones we love? And... *poke* don't apologize for the pigeons...actually...let me rephrase one sentence. "I just adore well-written horror spiced with a pinch of humor." I also liked the last sentence...a lot...

*sigh* If I could add R-rated fics to my horror community this would _so_ go there, but I guess I just have to be content with adding this to my favs.

(...actually, if you happen to know any good horror fics that are G - PG-13, would you please let me know...?)

Keh. Blasted pigeons. Poor Ryou.

Twisted, with a hint of lemon. I like it.

WOO! Bakura dominating poor little...uh Bakura...eh heh heh...BAKURAxRYOU FOREVER!*runs away to look for more Bakura x Ryou stuff*

That was good. A very good fic. Very well written. I loved the idea with the so called 'dreams'. Keep up the writing.

*applauds*

Oh, I love this!...does that make me sick and twisted? _~ So cool...you did a great job of portraying the kind of confusion-and denial-Ryou would have gone through. Heh...surely a very dark version of it, but quite believable I think. I must confess, Bakura/Ryou is another of my favorite pairings, for the simple reason that it has so *much* angst potential. And Ryou-torture is way too much fun. -_-;

Total awesomeness. Kukuku! *slaps dang pigeon away from head*
Seems very like when Ryou first heard the "voice" in the manga, with the added benifit of sex ;;
Excellent writing, but what else would I expect?

teehee, the pigeon bit was cute. Poor Ryou-chan though...
*glomops Ryou* don't worry! I hear voices too! -.-
great fic! nicely written. You conveyed the feeling of emotion very well.

Ah. The dangers that lurk when one doesn't know the difference between reality and fantasy.
I liked the piece. Your writing style's also good. Keep it up!

Realy good! you should continue it!