Oh man... I loved this story so much when it was first published. Lol loved it so much I printed the whole thing out, so I could read it as my family drove cross country. I was just looking for the online version again when I found the printed story(just now). I'm so busy I don't have time to sit and read but I do listen to books and fanfiction being read on my kindle. But it looks like the story is being rewritten? sigh... Well I cant base a review on the whole story when its now gone... but so far the first chapter is awesome! The writing has a smooth transition as well as the point of view switch. I'd love to see what becomes of the story, even though it looks like its been a number of years... :) Well here's to hoping...

i begg you to please update

please update and love it

Please update this! Why havent u updated? I mean it can't possibly take ten years to write one stinken story! Oh ya and thanks I guess... But u really should updated soon... Just sayin'

hola tu historia me gusta y la trama es interesante siguela me gusta mucho gracias y actualizar andrea (españa)

...update?

please continue!

Hi I love this story. I could have sworn I read the whole story before. If so can you tell ke the site that the whole thing is on. Thank you. If I'm wrong sorry for the mix up.

interesting story! update soon!

absolutely fantastic please update

keep up the great work i hope you update soon _

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

Kagome should adopt Shippo as her son so he can get away from his aunt. His best friend could be Sess's adopted daughter Rin.

WOW I really like it please update soon

i like it and hope u update soon!

when are you going to update?

I also really really liked the first chapter!