Reviews for On Marriage
Jessie20147 chapter 17 . 5/3
sad panda. I needs the rest. i hope you finish this soon. I know it's been years, but its so goooodddd
Guest chapter 17 . 4/29/2019
Seriously?! I find a fanfic I like and then discover it's incomplete.
Guest chapter 17 . 3/13/2017
Why didn't. You finish? I rest of the story.
rookseer chapter 17 . 4/24/2016
Lovely story. I like these marriage fics when they still try to keep the base core of the characters. It just makes more sense that way.
SaiyaCat chapter 17 . 4/1/2016
Please UpDate!
SaiyaCat chapter 1 . 3/31/2016
wow
mscarm chapter 17 . 10/1/2014
Really bummed that this story has been abandoned :/
AerinAlanna chapter 17 . 7/17/2014
This is definitely one of the better Marriage Law stories I've read, and one of the Severus/Hermione ones as well. I'm really excited to see what happens next.
Writtenaspr chapter 17 . 7/15/2014
This is a frank, unemotional, real life, yet sensitive painting of a forced marriage, between two highly intelligent, shy? people, and you write it in a lovely, non-commital, almost Jane Austenish manner. there is so much going on between the sentences... their own silent hesitant reading of each other -
Severus leaving her in peace, thinking her sullen, she tiptoeing aruond in his house bored they needed that missive to gain a bit of fireworks what gentle patience that night
Bravo , Bravo , bravo Refreshing to read. begging softly... Won't you please take up the baton again and conduct more of this music for us gentle readers.
It has been a while.. Has it been abandoned?
AmaliaSnape chapter 17 . 5/19/2014
And they slept for almost seven years...
halfblxod chapter 17 . 1/11/2014
This fanfic is siriusly good! Please continue!Its been about 6 years since you last updated!
bluefirefly5 chapter 6 . 8/29/2013
Hermione should have refused anyway.
MightyDamsel chapter 8 . 8/23/2013
"Malfoy's stories have been getting wilder and wilder as they've been passed around. This morning at breakfast I found out that we're expecting twins! Imagine my surprise. Merlin only knows what they'll be saying by dinner." this is the best line in the history of marriage law fan fics maybe even in the history of hg and ss!
the iz chapter 17 . 8/4/2013
i really like this, and i do not usually ship snamione :L well done!
raeshell chapter 17 . 3/29/2013
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