You used some words that Sonic characters would never use. It really put them out of character, please keep the fanfictions appropriate, you can still write a great story without curse or swear words.

Telethons suck! :3
Christmas is 4 days away I can't sleep ! :3

FUNNY! TELETHONS SUCK

Pretty good for a first post.

Interesting, final line. Now I'm really pulled in.

Haha aw cool! A little out of character and I didn't like the swearing, but I like the cute idea of how Sonic and Amy met. Cuz I always wonder where their parents were... Only Cream has parents. I also kinda saw a little bit of you in each of the characters. But that's cool, cuz that's how I write sometimes (espcially my own original fiction). Actually I just prefer adding myself in the story, lol. And wow this is from 2003? Anyway, nice job!

A few things, first, it would have been nice to know who was narrating closer to the beginning, second, it's sort of intimidating to be confronted by a giant wall of text. other that that, it's a good story.

That was the most perfect sonamy story i have ever read,IM SERIOUS! It was great! all i did reading the story was sigh in happiness while reading all the sweet fluffy parts of sonamy

i just LOVE YOUR STORY! Keep up the good work.

Aw I love this story, it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. _ "it involves Cream, Tails' allergies, me, and a bottle of garlic." :) Great job, nice Christmas story.

BRILIANT!

aaw!

i got a chokey feeling in my (DUH) throat!

hehahehaheh _

thats was cool! must read next chapter

Telathons suck! Please do more of the like. !*£)(O(*((%(*%&%%"£!%$(*)&£$& (That was for no reason)

this is so good please make more chapters i love it so much and make sonic more stories i love it.
Mikkey hodge