A whole chapter for an author note?

So, you don't like unfinished fics huh?

Last update: 2006
Current year: 2019

This story is fantastic and I am sorry to see that despite your best intentions it has not been finished. If you have migrated to a different site and finished or continued it there I would love to know. If RL stomped on you and derailed your plans I hope that you find the inspiration to continue in the future and I will put it on my alerts in hopeless optimism.

Even if you do not care to continue this I hope that you will continue to write as I ve3lieve you have too much potential to do otherwise.

Hey I think you down playing ranma skills way to much. Like his skill to extremely focus on training or how about much of a genies he his when fighting. I mean come on, he was 16 when he defeated saffron, who was like a god, through a lot of skill and determination and power but mostly through skill and determination than power. What makes me mad is you are putting him on the same level as spider Man, while ranma has been training his whole life. Plus he fought way faster and stronger enemies than spider Man. and the excuse that he an't use to his new powers is horrible because even without the new powers he plenty of powerful martial arts . And he wouldn't freeze up when( roko/ the women that was drunk at the bar ) attacks him just because she a women. And the reason he gets hit all the times with anken or shampoo or the other girls is because he considers them friends. Plus if he didn't let them hit him things would escalate a lot worse. For example bystander would put in danger, the dojo would be destroyed like in the wedding, and the built up frustration from not being able to hit ranma would most likely mean someone els death or permanent wound. I can't even think of ranma being a martial arts when you down play him so much. He's more like untrained hero who just went from being weak to strong. There are a few other things that need fixing, but I ran out steam to rant so Please fix this.

My god this is just as awesome as when I first read it. I eagerly await your next enjoyable chapter

symbiote's were never designed to actually be "good". This is accualy wrong if you look up there origins the symbionts are there own race, in the beginning they olny wanted to help and so needing a host to live they gave beings powers to do good. But every now and again a chemical inballince or defunct brain causes a bleed over from host to symbiont, this drove a few mad and they split off from the collective "good" and eventually devowered a planet. Just like there are good and bad humans, there are good and bad symbionts. In fact a few hosts down the line after flash venom becomes a hero.

venus is roman not norse

This awesome! Love the idea and it already looks to be well written

Good story, I hope you continue it.

"There comes a time when every man must live with a large group of women and be surrounded by them." Okay I know its not, but why do I feel like that SHOULD be a direct quote from the anime. Frankly I busted a gut when I read that. I can SOO see him saying that, and with a straight face no less.

Hope u update soon, can't wait to see the evolution

Fail

Sorry but that break down, the easy you went about it goes against the nature of shonen and mavel comics in general

"Ukyo, Akane and Shampoo are all very beautiful, strong and bright girls. I would not mind having any of them as my wife!"

Would Ranma really say something like that? It kind of seems like you're writing what you wish would happen rather than what would really happen. It's fanfiction, so there's nothing wrong with that, but you have a more selective audience this way. Sorry, but this just isn't my type of story :p

Yeah, you really aren't very good at writing romance stories. One of the first lines Nabiki says expresses concern for Ranma, and then she proceeds to fantasize about him a minute later? No back story, just a sudden character attraction because you like the idea of it? If I were Nabiki, I would be knocking on the front door of the Amazon's asking what love potion they tried using.

Meh...

Well, Kao was supposed to be Carnage after all...