Eth,

This story was awesome. Sucks you stopped right as you got to my favorite Naruto character (Shikamaru!).
And...uh...yeah, closure would be an awesome thing. Definitely. Give me me a message right here on ff and we'll talk.

- Adam

Looks interesting:-)

bah Ero-sage is probably on a cruise ship with both gender baths... that would fit the ~better place idea perfectly... i imagine they'll meet up with him right as he gets of the boat and sakura will scream something like ~GHOST! or ~I THOUGHT YOU SAID HE WAS DEAD!

-How can Orochimaru hold the kunai when his arms are injured? Eh, I was a little unsure as to how injured Orochimaru's arms were when I wrote this. I mean I know he can't use hand seals, but he still held up fairly well in the fight with Tsunade and Jiraiya. He even manages to go after Naruto and injure Tsunade with a kunai if I remember correctly. In any case, it is a good question and it is questionable, so I'll just classify this as another thing that falls under AU. Just indulge me.

hebi's arms had their soul taken out... making them useless... the only reason that he could stand toe to toe with his teammates is A: his kickass extendable tongue with his unbreakable sword that can cut through almost anything ~can you say adamantium?~ and has a powerful poison. B: Ero-sage was poisoned by little ms. slug queen making his chakra control around that of... well... naruto's to be truthful... and C: Mr. shiny-glasses #2 ~shino is Shiny glasses #1 as he did it first~/combat-medic Mr. SG/CM is the main reason Hebi managed to keep up... he helped fight... he drew blood and used it to summon the boss hebi... he kept Slug queen out of the fight with his own blood... he survived a direct hit from a rasengan ~incomplete or not that's awesome...~ he's just... well... awesome...

Ne, haven't updated since 2004?

Man. That sucks balls...!

wow that was really good i cant wait to read the next chapter and see what happens to naru-chan and the gang, also to find out who that man was that was at the end of the chapter. oh and a question, was team eight fighting someone or were they just getting ready to go and meet naru-chan?

anyways its a great story and i cant wait for the next chapter to come out.

nice description. I'm so adding this story to my fav stories list. _

This is the best Naruto fic EVER. The plot is like nothing I've seen before, I can't wait for the next chapter.

if Kyubi is a youma, PLS have the Sailor senshi show up and heal Naruto! If Sailor Moon healed Naruto, then prehaps the VILLAGERS will have to see that they were wrong all those years! Naruto IS not Kyubi! He is its jailer! I think Naruto, Gaara and Hotaru needs to have a chat about being unwilling hosts to youmas...*muses* It would be interesting if Kyubi, Mistress 9 and Shukaku got wiped out due to Princess Serenity!

this is a good story so please update soon. I would love to find out what happened to the village and what happened to Jiraya

Damn, why are good stories ALWAYS ending up discontinued? This is really good, the characterization perfect. The last scene was Jiraiya's point of view, right? The second last scene means the first group naruto will meet will be Kiba, Hinata and Shino. Itachi and Kisame's presence adds more excitment to the story. Are they still after Naruto for Ninetail's power, or do they also plan on some extra cash? Please update this fic!

Nice...Update asap.

threesome,sasu/saku/naru

Pity you're not updating this; it's an interesting fic.

Hm. I'd bet anything the man in the last scene was Jiraiya, coming back to the town where Naruto had been, and finding carnage caused by Itachi and Kisame.

Oh, and I loved the "furniture" earlier therein.

"- How often will you update this thing, anyway? Depends on how busy I am, but currently, I think we’re looking at once every 2-3 weeks."