Reviews for Unbidden Desires
Piertotum Locomoter chapter 24 . 8/11/2019
Love this!
Piertotum Locomoter chapter 16 . 8/11/2019
Oooooooh
Piertotum Locomoter chapter 12 . 8/11/2019
Woah...Mrs. Norris?
Piertotum Locomoter chapter 11 . 8/11/2019
Yey
Piertotum Locomoter chapter 10 . 8/11/2019
WHAT THE FU-
I hate that you did this.
Piertotum Locomoter chapter 8 . 8/11/2019
Isn’t it too soon?
E chapter 24 . 5/30/2019
This is a really interesting epilogue (if you can properly call it that). I have mixed feelings about the fact that it doesn't zoom into the future and show who married who and etc. on the other hand, I really love that is adds hope to, not only Draco and Ginny's relationship, but to other plot points I'd all but forgotten about. I found the ending unique and uplifting. Congrats on crafting one of those rare endings that doesn't leave the reader either wanting or relieved. Good job :)
The Jingo chapter 24 . 4/12/2017
Good read.
CF-RB-GW-LC chapter 24 . 5/29/2016
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Guest chapter 9 . 12/11/2014
Lol. Did you take Mr Benette, Mr Collins and Mr Bingley from Pride and Prejudice? They are mentioned in the note at the begining of the chapter. Nicely done.
enchantedstarlight chapter 6 . 7/1/2012
You said that this is your first fanfic? Well, kudos. You've got above average talent, m'dear! This story is charming so far. I love the way that you've portrayed our couple's little adventure. The way they went searching for the mirror is beautifully written - not that it's anything earth shattering, but it's so honest in its simplicity. I was drawn into their search, making it interesting and fun and with that bit of a mystery. The story and the plot flow very naturally. I also love how you've gotten their actions very well-matched for their age. Loving it so far.
digitalwitch18 chapter 24 . 12/17/2010
I just finished reading your wonderful story. I have to say it's one of the best fanfics I have ever read! I love the little touches you added to it, naming each chapter after a song title. ( You have good taste in music.) Also love the things you did with Mrs. Norris, and Filch, as well as Moaning Myrtle. I actually came to tears reading her going on. It was wonderfully done!
agoldenthrone chapter 12 . 10/28/2010
Well that's better. :D

Although, this is reminding me of Juliet now - it's like the sleeping potion or whatever she took.
agoldenthrone chapter 10 . 10/28/2010
NO! NO NO NO NO NO!

Blaise can't die! D:

It's far too much like Romeo killing himself for my liking.
Keladrion chapter 23 . 3/27/2010
Awesomeness! is this finished?
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