Reviews for Unbidden Desires |
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Piertotum Locomoter chapter 24 . 8/11/2019 Love this! |
Piertotum Locomoter chapter 16 . 8/11/2019 Oooooooh |
Piertotum Locomoter chapter 12 . 8/11/2019 Woah...Mrs. Norris? |
Piertotum Locomoter chapter 11 . 8/11/2019 Yey |
Piertotum Locomoter chapter 10 . 8/11/2019 WHAT THE FU- I hate that you did this. |
Piertotum Locomoter chapter 8 . 8/11/2019 Isn’t it too soon? |
E chapter 24 . 5/30/2019 This is a really interesting epilogue (if you can properly call it that). I have mixed feelings about the fact that it doesn't zoom into the future and show who married who and etc. on the other hand, I really love that is adds hope to, not only Draco and Ginny's relationship, but to other plot points I'd all but forgotten about. I found the ending unique and uplifting. Congrats on crafting one of those rare endings that doesn't leave the reader either wanting or relieved. Good job :) |
The Jingo chapter 24 . 4/12/2017 Good read. |
CF-RB-GW-LC chapter 24 . 5/29/2016 ! |
Guest chapter 9 . 12/11/2014 Lol. Did you take Mr Benette, Mr Collins and Mr Bingley from Pride and Prejudice? They are mentioned in the note at the begining of the chapter. Nicely done. |
enchantedstarlight chapter 6 . 7/1/2012 You said that this is your first fanfic? Well, kudos. You've got above average talent, m'dear! This story is charming so far. I love the way that you've portrayed our couple's little adventure. The way they went searching for the mirror is beautifully written - not that it's anything earth shattering, but it's so honest in its simplicity. I was drawn into their search, making it interesting and fun and with that bit of a mystery. The story and the plot flow very naturally. I also love how you've gotten their actions very well-matched for their age. Loving it so far. |
digitalwitch18 chapter 24 . 12/17/2010 I just finished reading your wonderful story. I have to say it's one of the best fanfics I have ever read! I love the little touches you added to it, naming each chapter after a song title. ( You have good taste in music.) Also love the things you did with Mrs. Norris, and Filch, as well as Moaning Myrtle. I actually came to tears reading her going on. It was wonderfully done! |
agoldenthrone chapter 12 . 10/28/2010 Well that's better. :D Although, this is reminding me of Juliet now - it's like the sleeping potion or whatever she took. |
agoldenthrone chapter 10 . 10/28/2010 NO! NO NO NO NO NO! Blaise can't die! D: It's far too much like Romeo killing himself for my liking. |
Keladrion chapter 23 . 3/27/2010 Awesomeness! is this finished? |