Exceptional, lyrical. I guess you've given up on this, but if you ever return to it, we'll be waiting.

This is frightening and wonderful.

I love it - please continue.

I like this, I really like this. It's well-written and the visions she seems to get of what is going to be are wonderful.

Awesome chapter! I can't wait for the next one!

I'm reading. Keep going! You have a very lush, lyrical style - your prose is like poetry, the way it flows. I also like how you interweave other elements, like that from fairytales within the text. It adds to the dreamlike tone, but it doesn't lose the idea that something much deeper is going on behind the prose.
Hehehe, one thing ... in chapter three, the ientire section is in italics. Was that intentional? I had the feeling you were using italics to indicate a shift of time/viewpoint/dream sequence in the other sections. Anyways, good story. I look forward to more.

I absolutely love this story! please update soon! _

Loved it. I haven't read anything else you have written, though.
Ragnhild